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interesting so far when garra finds out it'll be great :-)

sailor merc. told me about this story from i was taken in by it ive read it over and over.lol anyway im glad to see you updated...a kind of awkward ending but still nicely done

yay update!! you rule! weird ending but yay!

To the person who expressed their opinion on how the story should contiue with temari having an abortion, should she be pregant please, allow me to express mine. i am sorry, but if she does in fact turn out to be pregnant(excuse the poor spelling) it opens up miles and miles of possible cross roads as how the story can continue. Now alot of them can, could, will be lame yes but... you do not know legilmyth as i do. trust me, if she is pregnat, or even if she is not, there will be a twist that you will never see coming. she has this way... of completly throwing a person off, even one who helps... umm just a sec gotta think of the word.... correct errors in plot.(thats me :) ). don't get me wrong, i apologize if this sounds a little snappy, it was not my intention. I just thought i would express my feelings on your opinion and suggest that you continue reading for i can garuntee that there will events in this story that you may not see coming. :) but that of course is entirly up to you. you'll miss the good stuff if you quit now, but hey that s just me. if you do choose to discontinue reading, i thank you for reading as far as you did and reviewing cause it gets legilmyth's brain going all over again. have a good day:)

You really should have temari get the abortion or what ever it is they do in konoha to get rid of the forming child, it really wouldn't work well with your story, and HOnestly if you did, it would probably lose something that really got alot of people to read your story. If you have the abortion then things can continue the way they have been, but its your call. I doubt I'll continue reading if she has it, it's just a let down.

wow...amazing.....ive noticed it takes you awhle to update but it's prolly worth it considering everytime youv updated the wait was worth the new chap
good work keep it up

UPDATE NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

wow....i love this story i can't stop reading :-D keep up the good writing update soon plz!

(yay im on cloud 9) wow I was not on the site for a while and was pleasantly surprised to find some new chapters up. You leave me with so many questions like when will Gaara get the massage about Temari? Will Temari attackers come back to finish the job? And how long will Naruto apartment stay clean? Oh so many questions, (you just love to torture us don’t you?) Well just here to say still reading and loving it.

wow! i love this story prolly the best ive ever read!!!!!! im sending the link to my freinds i hope this is a long one lol byez!!