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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! You're back!!! I was so happy to see your story posted you probably heard the happiness all the way where you are!!! Please post more soon - I'm in withdrawal from your story!!! (Puppy-dog eyes.....)
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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!! WH Y IS THIS CHAPTER OVER!?!?! YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!!
your story is so outstandingly amazing, that i am 100% completely and totally addicted to it.
more chapters, please!
your story is so outstandingly amazing, that i am 100% completely and totally addicted to it.
more chapters, please!
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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, you have to update
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April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*GASP!*
well this definitely made my week, i was pretty sure that after AFF's "server improvement" this story was dead. Well, i'm just as psyched as ever for ch. 15 :D
well this definitely made my week, i was pretty sure that after AFF's "server improvement" this story was dead. Well, i'm just as psyched as ever for ch. 15 :D
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April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey that was a great chapter i have read all eight of your chapters and they all have been great i cant wait to see how there day went please continue to update this great story its really sad to read about what happened to temari i wonder if she is going to be pregnant please update soon
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April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far I have read all fourteen chapters yo have writen I cann`t wait till you catch up with this story when AFF was down well keep up the great work
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April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I cant wait to find out what happens when gara gets there and naruto catches up with guys who hurt temari. Keep writting!
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April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo!
Every now and then I come onto this site and search very carefully. I'm not into the whole porn thing, but every now and I browse and look for a story that isn't like that. It just ends up over here as opposed to at ff.net because the beginning situation is graphic and intense.
The thing I like the most of what you've done with the characters is how you're slowly working these two together. You're showing patience most authors don't have. Thanks for not trying to make this a one-shot...it would have been awful.
I have no idea what your intentions are...about whether or not this is going to end in a lemon, but I'll gladly read it up to that point. Good work.
Every now and then I come onto this site and search very carefully. I'm not into the whole porn thing, but every now and I browse and look for a story that isn't like that. It just ends up over here as opposed to at ff.net because the beginning situation is graphic and intense.
The thing I like the most of what you've done with the characters is how you're slowly working these two together. You're showing patience most authors don't have. Thanks for not trying to make this a one-shot...it would have been awful.
I have no idea what your intentions are...about whether or not this is going to end in a lemon, but I'll gladly read it up to that point. Good work.
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April 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow you got another chapter up (jumps up and down^_^) I love naruto in this story, he is such a sweetheart!. I would love to see Meeka actually try to say that she thought he was cute to his face (that would be funny). Well I think that the black lining of his eyes just adds to his mystique and his good looks (oooooo^_^). Well I love the story and I cant wait to see the upcoming chapters, please post it up soon.
P.S. Also I hope you don’t mind me reviewing again
P.S. Also I hope you don’t mind me reviewing again
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April 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this story so much, and I totally agree mmmmmmm Gaara, I love him. I’ve herd of getting a song such in your head but never a story, I cant stop thinking about it (sad eh?) I just cant wait for the next chapters, please write more soon.