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for After the pain

by Legilmyth

schedule April 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww. Naruto is such a sweet heart. I love the way this story is coming along. Can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Temari. I can only imagine how I'd feel. I hope Gaara, preferably Naruto, or maybe both. . .. .find those stupid guys that hurt her. Are you planning to bring up the rapers in the story? Like who they are? or if we even know them? just saying b/c something like this would NOT be going ignored by anyone. ESPECIALLY lil bro and Naruto. It's prolly silly to say this, but I envision Naruto as a Teddy bear when I read your fanfic. Not literal or anything. Just his sweet character. I really like it.
Can't wait for the next chapter

~Redwitch05 ^.~
person Jamie
schedule April 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's realy nice pleace post soon