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for After the pain

by Legilmyth

person riversan
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So happy to come upon a few more chapters of this story!! I hope you have time to update, this is a very interesting plot (don't die, Kakashi... Naruto, come home!)
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I'm curious to see how it turns out and would love to know when the next chapter is posted.
person Zidiane
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
duuu~de! i was... can't believe i'm gonna say this, but i was "researching" how lemons are done. i need to write some but mine always come out not to my liking. anyway! i was researching, right up until i found your story. you bastard, you have kept me from researching for almost a week, you know that? your story is addicting, for no reason! anyway, i would like to ask you a favor, seeing as how you did an amazing job with this story (i'm only at chapter 19, btw), could you read my story, and tell me what you think? http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5951491/1/Team_Naruto, that's where it is. it's "Team Naruto", and i would like to know what you think of it. you, sir, are one of the few people i have felt a need to review. normally, it's like "cool story. next." but yours was different... i'm gonna stop there, cause if i continue, i'll just loop around with the same compliments over and over. but, yeah, could you tell me what you think of my story?
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo!!! Updates!!! :D

I’m so excited that Naruto is almost home!!! Although Kakashi is now in some serious shit. Holy crap. There’s all sorts a stuff happening right now and I’m not sure I want to wait the forever it will take until the next chapter!! (lol ~ well it seems like forever, anyway. ^^)

Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please don't tell me Kakashi dies! PLEASE...NO.........
Can't Naruto save him? Please
It was worth the wait for the update. I love this fic. I re-read it every time you have updated. I look forward to the next update!
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Having been reading your story for something like 5 years now, I continue to enjoy its progression. Keep writing and I can't wait to read it through to the end :)
person phil
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just needed to tell you this is one of the better storys i have read cant wait to see how everything ends!!!
person statnin
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
.....awwwwwweeesssssoooommmmeeee.......
knew u hadnt given up ;)
update soon
Leaf out
person Josh B.
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Legilmyth? It's been a while since I read this story and since I am getting back to speed with Temari and her thing with Naruto. It's going to be hard to say this but Temari loves Naruto even though she doesn't know it yet. I think Kakashi needs to read that book a.s.a.p. I hope your muse gets back on the horse so you can make this story how it was. The best read in a long time hope you update soon.

Josh
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I am enjoying every bit of it and I would really like to see more of it please. Keep up the great work. Wonderfull.