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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, glad you got around to putting the new one up. Just to say, if you reworked this as a non-Naruto story, you could probably publish it with a little bit of work.
Hope to see more from you in the future.
Hope to see more from you in the future.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you're updating this story again. I truly love it and can't wait to (finally) find out whats going on with Temari and to see the two of them officially come together.
Keep up the excellent work. ^^
Keep up the excellent work. ^^
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey how ya been. I am glad to see that you updated your story. I was kinda intranced into your last chapter that I am not gonna wanna read any more stories until I read this one to the very end. I love the scene in the forest with Naruto and Temari... I would like for someone to draw a picture of them like that. Til next time Legilmyth
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*jumps for joy* AN UPDATE! And I so sympathize with you--my muse just likes to be a lazy someone too! But I have loved this story for the LONGEST and I'm glad it's back up! You go! Keep it up and welcome back.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated. I have been hooked on this one and waiting patiently for a new chapter. Great job!
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
impressive, very impressive. this caught my eye by the rather odd angle for a romance to story begin with, but it really has turned out beautifully. the original characters are colorfully made, the plot is excellent, and kyubi's attitude is spot on. with the end of every chapter you can't help but want more. there aren't a lot of ways to place real appreciation into words but it truly is terrific, I give it a 10/10. keep up the good work and i can't wait for the next chapter.
starring out the window in deep contemplation,
absentmindedly sipping tea,
a wandering stranger
starring out the window in deep contemplation,
absentmindedly sipping tea,
a wandering stranger
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is truly one of the best stories of Naruto that I have ever seen.The plot is awsome with plenty of twists
and turns not counting deep that you can almost feel the chars emotions.I can't wait to see the next chapter
and have bookmarked the story.I congratulate you for making a fine art and letting all of us read this
masterpiece.
and turns not counting deep that you can almost feel the chars emotions.I can't wait to see the next chapter
and have bookmarked the story.I congratulate you for making a fine art and letting all of us read this
masterpiece.
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great so far. I have been reading this from the beginning and I have no critique or anything that I can say about it. 1000000000000/10 stars for you.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah...still hoping you update soon. I know I am being selfish, but I need more...PLEASE!!!