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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story.well thought out.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooo where are you going?
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just wanted to congratualate on your story and how its turned out. I have been reading it for a while and its has help inspier me to write my own stories (fanfiction and real). I don't comment people often and when I have it has been just because they made a mistake, so this is my first official actual review.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the chap... But I am still trying to figure something out.. The white chakra what does it mean exactly.. I guess Kakashiand Iruka are a couple or very close friends... I hope you are safeand I will be waiting to read your story....
Always Josh B.
Always Josh B.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah...so....um...how do I say this without trying to look like I'm off my rocker...? Hmmm...oh, fuck it.
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE I AM JUST GETTING AROUND TO READING IT! Oh, gosh, I looooooove it! YOU, oh-author-who-I-am-not-worthy-of, Pronounce us story and wife!
Lol, j/k, j/k. I LOVE how you used the term 'Floored' a lot, it just makes me laugh because I say it like every other sentance and my friends are all like, "You're WHAT?" lol. So, yeah, this story is an AMAZING piece of work and I refuse just stack your work up against any other authors who have written a NaruTema fic, because this one just BLOWS them all away! By far!
Notes: Kakashi is GREAT. He is too freaking funny and I just love him! Tsunade/Kakashi made a funny comedy duo that's for damn sure! Anyway, keep up the amazing work and I can't wait until your next update! Laters for now, you rock my scooby-doo sox! lol (I just needed an ending clencher, ignore me)
Your fellow author/fan,
~Sho-Chan~
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE I AM JUST GETTING AROUND TO READING IT! Oh, gosh, I looooooove it! YOU, oh-author-who-I-am-not-worthy-of, Pronounce us story and wife!
Lol, j/k, j/k. I LOVE how you used the term 'Floored' a lot, it just makes me laugh because I say it like every other sentance and my friends are all like, "You're WHAT?" lol. So, yeah, this story is an AMAZING piece of work and I refuse just stack your work up against any other authors who have written a NaruTema fic, because this one just BLOWS them all away! By far!
Notes: Kakashi is GREAT. He is too freaking funny and I just love him! Tsunade/Kakashi made a funny comedy duo that's for damn sure! Anyway, keep up the amazing work and I can't wait until your next update! Laters for now, you rock my scooby-doo sox! lol (I just needed an ending clencher, ignore me)
Your fellow author/fan,
~Sho-Chan~
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... seven months! I hope everything will be alright.
Anyway, I'd just like to say this was another great chapter. I can't wait to find out what exactly going on and look forward to Naruto's return. This story just seems so epic. I fell like we're only just scratching the surface between the mysterious white chakara and the unknown new Akatsuke-like threat. Keep up the good work. (And don't worry.. those shakes and gitters are just normal when you're going through internet-withdrawal.)
Anyway, I'd just like to say this was another great chapter. I can't wait to find out what exactly going on and look forward to Naruto's return. This story just seems so epic. I fell like we're only just scratching the surface between the mysterious white chakara and the unknown new Akatsuke-like threat. Keep up the good work. (And don't worry.. those shakes and gitters are just normal when you're going through internet-withdrawal.)
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.
A little unexpected on some things, but still great.
Sad to year it will take a while for the next update.
But I have bookmarked your story ^^.
Hopefully you will be able to post something sooner, but I can wait if it is necessary.
Thank you for your good work.
A little unexpected on some things, but still great.
Sad to year it will take a while for the next update.
But I have bookmarked your story ^^.
Hopefully you will be able to post something sooner, but I can wait if it is necessary.
Thank you for your good work.
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Doing good, doing good... I'm not much for fan fics but this one is like reading a book. Great stuff. I have commented before but I can;t remember the name I used... it was probably Caterham, Se7en, Paladin, or a mix of those... XP sorry.
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work. I have been waiting for a bit now lol.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story.
One of the best plots i've read in awhile.
Really looking forward to the next chapter
Criticism: The kakashi plot->white chakra seems a little odd, but i guess it's because i dont know what the whole deal is
Positive: I really enjoyed the duel with Iruka, the babysitting scene with sasukes kids, and the shopping scene with hinata. The little scenes showing how naruto is appreciated. Oh, and the part where he slams the ANBU's head into the wall kicked ass.
Rock on man
Any clue when the next chapter will be out?
One of the best plots i've read in awhile.
Really looking forward to the next chapter
Criticism: The kakashi plot->white chakra seems a little odd, but i guess it's because i dont know what the whole deal is
Positive: I really enjoyed the duel with Iruka, the babysitting scene with sasukes kids, and the shopping scene with hinata. The little scenes showing how naruto is appreciated. Oh, and the part where he slams the ANBU's head into the wall kicked ass.
Rock on man
Any clue when the next chapter will be out?