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It's been a while since I delved into the fanfic realm. Originally I was just looking for a nice lemon or two, but this story intrigued me, and now I have to say it's so good I stayed up all night reading.
Since I only just joined, I don't know how long you usually take to update, but I do hope you'll provide us with a new chapter soon. Your writing style is nice, and you know something about building up suspense. I'm at the edge of my chair asking myself a few questions: What's Kakashi's background? What's happening to Temari and her child.. and why does it appear to possess that white chakra? Will Kyuubi regain some of his control? .. and whatever happened to Neji to make him swear like that? :P
Keep it up, you're doing great! :)

I didn't want to review until I read all of the chapters so far. AWESOME is the only word I can come up with!! And that too is an understatement!! This is just too good! Please hurry :) Naruto and Temari...I never would have figured, but it does make sense. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the updates...soon, PLEASE!!!!

Oh my gosh! Updates! (I love this story and actually haven't read it in a long while and had a bunch to catch up on. I'm so glad its updating, because its so incredibly well done.)


The whole white chakara thing intrigues me. What could be its connection to Kakashi, if any at all. It could just be a sworn vengeance thing, maybe? Very exciting stuff. Naruto is going to flip when he gets back. Gaara's still flipped. What oh what could be hiding in Mist? And I'm thinking the Maternity nurses that come in on the next shift are going to know whats going on with Temari's pregnancy even before Tsunande, if only for the simple fact that they just make the uninformed assumption that she's pregnant and hook her up to a fetal monitor to check the status of her child. I kept cringing every time Temari kept pushing herself despite her body giving her subtle hints that its putting a strain on her belly/child. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!!

Thanks for updating so soon, I've been reading your story for longer than I care to tell and can't wait to see what happens next.

Hely Legilmyth.. Glad ur still writing after the pain.. I was thinking about the feeling Naruto had when he woke up from a sound sleep.. I know how that is cuz I've woken up out of the blue and it felt likesomebody was trying to reach me in a way.. So that was what Naruto felt when he woke I think.. Hope ur writer's block goes away and u can update ur stories love to hear from u when u get time

Damn. Course over me.

I ignored your story first, because I thought "Naruto and Temari? Not quite my favorite couple".

But bloody hell, I'm glad I read it all now. I Can't wait until you continue.

Damn, I even cried on some Scenes here. Very good story.

I'm eager to read more of this.

Hmm. If I would be forced to make a guess, I would say that Naruto will remove Kyubis seal relativly soon, because he will kyubis help to save Temari ^^.

I'm almost ready to take bed's on this one.

awesome story! keep up the great work.

OMG I love your story! I keep coming back to this site just to read your fic over and over again! I absolutely enjoy it and I will be sad when you end it! Please let me know when you update!

i love this story its so good i so cant wait for an update