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Keep it going, this story is quite amazing.

Hey! I stumbled across your story 3 days ago and i've just spent the last 3 days absolutly absorbed in it and unable to stop reading, i absolutly love it, your writting style is amazing, your development of the charecters is realistic and emotive i cant wait to read the next chapter i just dont know how long i can wait until i start getting withdrawel symptoms lol Also would it be possible to let me know when you update next, my email address is attached to this review, Thank you and please keep writting lol
Willow222 -x-

another brilliant chapter, thank you :-)

I want more...really really

More please

very good story. did a marathon read through over about 2 1/2 days. liked it alot. wonderes where tenten, sakura, shikamaru, ino, choji, and kiba were for the first part of the story, but you mentinedthe first four. what happened to choji and kiba because either you did not mention it or i forgot. please either include them of like list their activities. other than that, great story behind naruto's unborn son and his inter action with kyubi. very smart. this is one of the best rape recovery stories i have read in a while. please continue

I have only reciently stumbled across this story (with this most recent update) and I just want to let you know how much your story has moved me and how wonderful I think it is. I almost don't even know where to begin, but I knew I had to type something.


I think, unlike most stories, you handle the topic or rape with a deep respect. There is alot of levels of hurt going on here, between both Temari and Naruto. Their deveoping relationship is fantastically well written. The way you capture both their neediness and thier problems, in addition to their discoveries about on another, makes for a believeable and entrancing story. Also, the chapter regarding what Jewel did to Naruto was hear wrenching. I love it. I love your story and simply can not wait until your next installment. You are an excellent author and I hope you are aware of that fact.

Keep up the great work. (I'll be waiting. ^^)

Ah, I see we're starting to get to the meat of the story. Well done, and yeah, you're evil.

Wow! Where do I start? I am SO excited to see you updating - you have no idea! I decided to re-read starting back at chapter 8 or 9 and read the whole thing solid from there. I like the pacing and characterization you have going. This latest chapter was a bit disjointed in that you covered a lot of different people and stories all at once, but it also felt like you had gotten back into your game, writing-wise. I really enjoy seeing where you are going with this, and hope to see more soon. Keep up the good work!

first and foremost i must apologize for not finding this site and your fic sooner :), i wish i could have been there to review the first chapter :( but hey I'm here now and the story is great. i was sorry to read that you had the unfortunate luck to be plagiarized, i have no respect for a person who would go so far as to steal another's work. it is absolutely despicable. i also read that you breed horses! I LOVE HORSES!!! i wish i could have one but im only 18 :(
anyways on to my actual review of the writing:

OMG OMG don't let anything happen to temari!!! although she probably just let her wound get into the water :P waking up in blood red water cant be good for her trauma addled brain...

and when will naruto stop being stupid and unseal the kyuubi, while the fox needs a lesson in tact im sure he means well, poor lonely fox, the back flips were nice :3

i cant wait too find out whats up with the white chakra! how does it work? how does the curse attached to it work? and whats the deal with the hatake clan and the white chakra... im guessing that kakashi hasnt had any intimate relations so as to not pass on the curse atached to the white chakra?

ARGG SOO MANY QUESTIONS BOUNCING AROUND IN MY HEAD!!
congratulations, your story has spawned my largest review to date!
well i hope you update soon!

PS. how does tha update notification thing work?

well anyways JaaNee!

wow!!... this story's awesome!!! i'm realy and i mean realy looking forward to the next chapter