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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm....
This was fun to get into. You have this way of pulling people into the story, making them feel as though they are apart of it. I was drawn to you because you write my favorite Naruto pairing, as I said before, but I think when I am done here, I will check out your other stuff simply because I like the way you write.
It is so hard to find a really good fic these days....
This was fun to get into. You have this way of pulling people into the story, making them feel as though they are apart of it. I was drawn to you because you write my favorite Naruto pairing, as I said before, but I think when I am done here, I will check out your other stuff simply because I like the way you write.
It is so hard to find a really good fic these days....
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice! I like how you write!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. Definitely very well-written. I love poetic stories like this. Was the poem yours as well, 'cause I've heard something like that before. Very nice. And not too explicit, no.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woa, deep. Nup it wasn't too explicit, it was perfect! I really like your style of writing. Especially your paragraphing. I love single word lines. Great use of meaningful words (I loved the "nothing" and "everything"). It was a great read, thanks for writing it ^^
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April 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is very well written! I liked it even though I'm not really a fan of the pairing. The pace and mood were great. XD Um....well, considering this site is and ADULT site, i doubt if anyone would think it was too explicite...there isn't anything graphic in it at all. Not to say that it wasn't sexy, because it was. Nice work!
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April 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your writing style is beautiful, I don't favor ItaNaru so much at all but this fic was really intriguing. Keep up the good work!
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April 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm. I like it. You don't see ItaNaru often. I like how you focused mainly on Naruto's thoughts, keeping Itachi mysterious. Very angsty thoughts from Naruto. Also, breaking up the story with the poetry added to it a lot. Keep it up!