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Do you want to know how much I love this story? I love it so much that I have read the whole thing despite the fact that for some reason the formatting is so screwed-up that this appears before every single paragraph: Doujutsu style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";mso-bidi-font-family:
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I have no idea why that junk is there but it is quite annoying yet the story is so compelling that I valiantly slog through the crap just to filter out your precious words. (Hows that for ass kissing the author in hopes of getting more chapters?) I don't know what you see when you post your stories but most of them are full of the bad formatting stuff when I read them. I don't think it is a problem on my end as some of your stories and most stories of other authors are o.k. Again, I read your stuff anyway because it is all awesome. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Wow! It's quite a unique work. Any more canon, and it'd be a bit boring. But luckily, you still made me love it, with all the mind works and personal views. I wonder why Naruto doesn't use his superior senses anymore... Or does he still have them after the second part of the seal? I assume so, since he'd have commeented on them dulling otherwise. Or not? Being deprived from external noises and light for 3 months could ake him not notice the change....
Other: I cauth Naruto saying 'believe it' in a previous chapter - I hope it won't come back, afterall, you used dattebayo too.
Questions:
What happened to the arsonists? Both Tsunade and Shika and Neji decided to find and punish those that set fire to Naruto's apartment.
How did the rescuers not see Naruto breathing, when he was shown as 'dead'? It should have been faint, but there. Well, not like I'd watch for it, AFTER Neji confirmed his death...
Will you change Arashi to Minato or will it stay for the whole story? - If you plan on continuing and finishing the story...

I hope you'll come back to update.

Thanks for writing and sharing this gorgeous piece!

I really liked this story till chapter 7... after that it became impossible to read, so i wouldn't know. Either you or your beta or both aren't doing the job as it should be. Try and read your own chapters as they appear here on the site. I did try, I swear I did and only got a huge headache out of it, without being able to undestand anything. Please fix the chapters,, as it is a pity to leave the story as it is. Thanks.

Yess You deserve a review...
Sry for not reviewing earlierXD
This is sooo lovely...

I love this story! I read it way back in the day and I got the craving to see if it had been updated or completed. I'm glad to see that there have been recent updates! Please update again soon~ <3 Most of the time stories just jump straight into sexy time but I love how you use the actual Naruto world in this fic!

Interesting interesting! Things keep thickening very nicely. I admit to feeling confused as to how it'll resolve but I'm happy to be reading along. I do hope your other stories will be updated soon. *chibi pleads, offering bowls of ramen and sweets*

:D Really Loved you're Story ^-^ please Keep up the good work!

hey welcome back! like the chappie, since you always seem to come through, even if it has been a while. ;-)

First off..NICE TO SEE YOU BACK!!!!!

Second, you're definitely making the plot thicker and thicker. How did they find out Naruto is Minato's son? Is all confusing as to what's going on. Hehe..can't wait for more on this and other stories you have going on!

Oh wow, at first, i thought how clichè, but wow, i love this story. Naruto is just so *unnnnn* *kyaaaa* *fangirlmode* I loved how he got out of his prison and kicked some asses *yes* Really, Itachi and Naruto need eachother.....*nosebleed* Thank you for this really nice Lee and Gaara moments. Sorry i´m a sucker for this pairing...>_> i see in everthing hot steamy sex even if they´re just in the same room.... And Itachis Backgroundstory....*snüff* i would have killed them too >_> or just kicked there asses. Arghhhh i need more strong!Naruto and more ItaxNaru love. *jumps around* i´m addicted to your storys now....*puppy eyes* need more ^^