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for Winter Release

by Cepheus

person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! yes! w00t! woohoo!...its not gonna be that easy huh? theres gonna be something wrong with naruto mind or something isn't there? have the dcotors told anyone about itachi? does anyone know?
omg plz continue!
person Dark Toy
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can't possibly imagine the joy I had when I saw "Winter release chapter 20". I was crawling up the wall while my father was ussing the computer.
It's 9:17 and I'm so happy that I just have to scream dattebayo! at the top of my lungs.

Anyway, about this chapter, yes it was necessary. And I feel, that in the way it's been made, It was a good chapter that expressed the despair of Naruto's friends, as well as the strenght that the kid has.
Itachi, after chapter 19, is probably thinking a lot about Naruto. But not about the shared encounters they had. No, he may be thinking about something deeper.
"What color...?"

Yes... what color indeed...
I think Naruto might be some sort of golden. Because that's the only way to describe his light. Because he is like the sun. Like a star.
And for God's sake, Itachi WILL see that...

UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE AND EXPRESS EVERYTHING!!!!!
(and again, pardon my english, I'm argentinian =)
person xBunni
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter Cepheus-san~ ^^ Please don't say that it was boring, ne? I almost cried when Kakashi heard that naruto was alive~ Maa... A very emotional chapter, ne~? ^^ Lol~ I'm glad Cepheus-san updated, I've been waiting forever for this chapter, heh~ ^^;; Oh yea!! Will there be kakanaru in this? ^^;; Pleassse? Even one-sided is fine!! OO *whimpers* Ja!! Gambatte ne, Cepheus-san~!! I can't wait to see where this fic is going, na no da~!! ^^ *glomps*
person Kisu
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOMG.
Please~ update soon! Omg!
I was so~ not expecting anyone but akatsuki to find him! GAH!
I need more~
person tortilla lady
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your character development & plot, please update soon, i'm excited to read the rest of your story!!
person Jaded Alone x
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The long awaited chapter! Now I still have to wait for the next! :]
I'm really wondering.. what's going to happen with Naruto's and Itachi's weird
relationship. It bothers me so! Wow, I loveee this story to deathh! ;_;
Can't wait for your next chapter!! I shall try and wait patiently~
Rhi~
person Jazzy
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Wow, I love this story more and more each time. I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve. I know Im just going to like it, I can't see myself Not liking it. So hopefully you'll update soon. Because if there is ONE thing I CAN complain about, is the updates. I always have to read the chapter before the one you just posted to remember exactly what happened. But I don't mind (so much), cause the story is good, and I know it's only getting better. I can't wait to see what happens next. What will Itachi do? And a question thats been botherin me like crazy is: Who the hell is the leader of them? I know it has to be someone from the Hyugaa family. If the man has the same eyes as neji and Hinata. Only their family has those eyes... But Is it possibly Neji's father? Haha. Ah well... Im probabbly wrong in the assumption. But the mere thought sends shivers down my spine. Anyways, hopefully I'll see ya next chapter! Love you and please update soon!
person theDeviant (too lazy to login)
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So good! Actually, this was probably one of my favorite chapters so far, just...because.. i suppose. Anyway, update relatively soon!
person choo
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.. i would like to write a few pages concerning how much i adore your story, but somehow the words elude me, so i would just like to say that what i love the most about your fic is mentioned realism in cause and reaction and every character's well thought out personality which you actually stick to (not to mention the revealed plotline);) i am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

hope that came out understandable,(i'm spending a year abroad and slowly languages are starting to mix and form one ugly blob in my mind) so sorry if not^^;;
person Kai-mono
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as always, another very entertaining and well-written chapter! ^^ i can't wait to read the next one. ganbette.