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for Winter Release

by Cepheus

person Lap
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I...have no words to tell you just how much I enjoyed reading your story. I am rendered unable to ever again look at Itachi with the same eyes, no matter in fiction or in the anime itself. The way you write him, the relationship you're developing between him and Naruto in the middle of a steadily thickening plotline is simply captivating! Your style of writing, intentionaly or not, boosts all those feelings, the words falling in place like small peaces of a puzzle to create a bigger picture that captures you and makes your mind twist in need to see it finished! Please continue writing and give us more pieces of this fascinating puzzle soon!
person hegyl
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update... I can't believe how much you leave me hanging on almost every chapter... This chapter didn't have much action, but at least we gotz some hope in for Naruto... Hopefully he gets out this time... But you're the author... Just please update already, I think im'a die from waiting... O_O
person ObsidianLace
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once I started reading this I simply couldn't pull myself away from the screen. I started it at 9pm yesturday night and read till 5am. After a 3 hour nap I started agian. Now it's 9pm agian and I've just finished.

It was entirely worth it. I absolutely love the way you developed the story and didn't just slap something together. You acctually had me tearing up at points and thats tough to do. Were I an artist of any talent I'd draw fanart for you but since my talents could make a cat laugh...I won't.

(I was call anti-social at least 4 times cuz I didn't look up from my reading btw.)

I'm completly hooked to this wonderful story and I can't wait to see if Naruto gets to Gaara in time for damage control. I'd love to know what's on Sauske's mind. Itachi...what's to say bout him. He's cool and madly crazy at the same time. But at least the sex is hot. When the others find Naruto (they find him I hope right? *puppy dog eyes*) Neji needs to turn around and say 'Told ya so.' And yay for Gaara figuring it out right away. That's my smart little Subaku boya.

Anyway. Thank you for writing this. I'll be looking for the updates with bells on!
person Zrina
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved the update!! Have to say, it probably was a good thing that Naruto didn't try to use the seals on his body against the door. Hate to see them react explosively and him lose a body part!! If nothing else, the way he removed them and broke out will reaffirm to Itachi his strength of will and will further frustrate his inablility to "classify" the blonde! Can't wait to see Itachi's reaction to finding out about Naruto's escape. Hmm, maybe Itachi will go all "clan-killy" again and off his fellow Ataksuki members :D

/waiting breathlessly for next update!!
person ladygizarme
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ack! whose chakra was it?? aiyaa this was a looooong awesome chapter! i loved it!! i love how naruto got his determination back and was able to escape.. and i wonder what sasuke's gonna do when he gets where he's going.. ahh.. words fail me right now, so i'll leave it at this right now.. great chapter, can't wait for the next!
person Aarins Ensamheten
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaay!! You updated!! <3<3 Remember me? *points at my grinning face* ^^’’’ As I promised, here's a review! :3 It was wonderful! I especially like the way you described sasuke back there, unfortunately I dont precisely know WHAT it was I liked about it so much... maybe the feeling of it? Whatever it is, keep it up(?) <.<'' But what's going to happen to poor naru? T-T I cant wait for this story to unfold! >.<
Anyways, good luck with the next chapter... and of course everything else ^.^<3
person ItachisHottie
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nejishika,interesting,i like it
person Kisu
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! That was soooo Goood! >.<
He's FREE! But for how long, I wonder? D:
person ayonoi
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter, worth waiting for and I was excited to see Naruto escape. I am also enjoying Itachi's confusion. While your plot deviates from the manga, i really love it though, I can't wait to see Naruto get to where Gaara is and if he is going to run into the rescue team or worse, will he run into Sasuke! I really like this fic and I look forward to more.

person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o...m...g....YAY! so freakin awsome you kick so much ass! plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz CONTINUE!!!