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by Cepheus

person Sir Magus
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u cant let Gaara die!! if u do then Naruto will be sad! and wat bout Itachi? Naruto was just starting to reach him-will Itachi recapture Naruto? or will Sasuke get to him first? i cant sit still im so anxious to read the next chapter pls pls u have to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person Jaded Alone x
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMGYUSSSS!!!!!!11 I have been waiting SOO long for the next chapter!
And I was not disapointed whatsoever! I fawking loved it sooo much!!
It's GREAT to know that Narutokun is finally out.. it brings tears
to my eyes! -sobs- I can just imagine how that would feel... to finally
see daylight after so long in the darkness.. ohgawd, it's great! You're
the BESSTTTT!!! I'll be waiting happily for the next chapter ^_________^

Rhi <333333
person Forbidden Secrets
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say first... I A B S O L U T L Y love you. It is so hard to find a good Itachi/Naruto story [let alone find one at all XD] and I'm absolutly entralled with yours. The characters are jsut OCC enough ot make the plot work but still so much like themselves that it is a real pelasure to read. The story flows well and the almsot casual reveling of Itachi is stunning. I simply cannot wait for the next chapter to come out! Great job!

-Forbidden Secrets
person Yo!
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please oh please update asap! The suspense is killing me! you have no idea! I just love everything... I read stright through... ALL CHAPTERS 1-17 as soon as i found the story! Please, please, please, PLEASE, update!!!! I will wait with no patience!!
person Jaded Alone x
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont understand why you don't have like, a thousand reviews.
It's more worthy than 3 thousand of them! The only thing I can
tell you, is.. I think you are too amazing. This.. peice of art
is so..

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L

The way you write. The deepness in every chapter. It's all too
much! It makes me want more and more and more and SO much more!
The relationship you've created with Itachi and Naruto is too
incredible to describe. I wish I could give you much more
appealing words, but I'm too stunned to really configure anything.
I've been reading since.. 11pm. It is now.. 5:42 am. Yes.. I love it.
I LOVE YOU!! FOR WRITING SUCH GREATNESS! I'm trying not to sound like
a weird mindless reviewer that's just like.. U R GREAT! PLZ UPDATE
UPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Ok now I'm babling.. I'm sleepy.. and this
the longest review I've ever send someone!!! I hope you like it!

Goodnight, your greatness! -glomp-

-Rhichan [now a very big fan of yours]
person kisu
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for updates!
>.<
person kitsune_812
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!! you're the bestest...
Hey I was sendin the mail to see If i can get to know you by msn or whatever you got in that computer of yours... But don't you have the feeling that you are making us suffer a lot ;___; man... I'm paranoid... i need to know how it ends... PITY ME !! >_< ... *i'm gonna be okai...
anyway... the story is gooooood *-* ..
see ya * mi e-mail is gypsie_curse@hotmail.com ..
person DismalBismuth
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This fic is so cool! Arg, I've been so tired of tired ol' generic SasuNaru (especially the rising number of badly written ones)and I come across this! Sweet!

I really like how you don't make this just about Itachi and Naruto. The focus is there obviously, but you fill the fic with so many other things and still manage to add all the other various relationships into the story without it becoming a bore. I also love the fact that there isn't any SasuNaru, and that Sasuke hasn't really been in it at all. Honestly, the Naruto verse does not rise and set with his character.

Itachi's mindset is interesting, and the flashbacks add alot. But I'm not sure where you're heading with the relationship. Can he really not love? I understand that it will never ever be fluff and bunnies (maybe dead bunnies... undead bunnies of doom...) I guess I'm just hoping for expansion, which I understand is pretty difficult with such a blank character.

Anywho, really enjoying it anyways, so keep it up!
person Evol
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it lies! dont beleive her! nothings gonna happen!
person DevilLived
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is going very well so far! Your writing just keeps getting better and better. I love how you came up with Itachi's side of the story, it made a lot of sense.

Great job so far! Update soon!