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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is absolutely fascinating. The way you portray Itachi is believable and gives him a depth that most fics don't touch on. You are a very talented writer whose words flow, scenes are pertinent and contribute to the story line, and whose characters are fleshed out and realistic. I can't wait to see further updates!!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot a new chapter! i really liked the dive into itachi's mind again; i can really see that all as being his real thoughts in the manga if we were ever able to take a glimpse inside his mind.. also naruto's thoughts on the matter of itachi, himself, itachi and himself together, and itachi compared to him, etc. was really good; i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is awesome! I started reading this morning from chap 1 and I couldn't stop!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg. this story is SO AWESOME. thank u SO MUCH. this story was like breathing again after drowning in a sea of bad fanfiction. u are an AMAZING writer. i love how u don't rush into the plot, and i feel like u've really kept everyone in character! PLEASE put another chapter up ASAP! i can't wait to find out what happens to Gaara!! (please don't hurt my Gaara-kun T.T) and i REALLY want to know what happens to Itachi and Naruto! please hurry!!! your adoring fan, Nightelfknight
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter--naruto got to touch itachi's hair!! yay! and i so love deidara too!! can't wait for the next chapter.. wonder if neji will start doubting his conviction of naruto being alive when konoha finds out gaara's been taken?
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to know what goes through Itachi's head @_@ He's kinda confusing ^^; but i hope Naruto manages to get more out of him ^^
Poor Neji tho =/ They all do have a point but gah DX BAKA'S! *then again i didnt realise the fact about the bodies until it was told* =P
But YES! Deidara rocks! XD
I cant wait to read more! ^^
Liah xx
Poor Neji tho =/ They all do have a point but gah DX BAKA'S! *then again i didnt realise the fact about the bodies until it was told* =P
But YES! Deidara rocks! XD
I cant wait to read more! ^^
Liah xx
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whats up with this. whgen zabuza was carried off by haku kakashis all suspiciuso but the same thing pretty much happens to naruto and kakashi...eh whatever. COOLNESS! but what the fuck are itachi and naruto doing?
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude, it would be so freakin weird/cool if for whatever reason, while naruto and itachi are going at it like red-eyed animals, naruto said sasujes name. lol!
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this chp itachi is so hot!! i think im in luv YAY! but anyways i cant wait for the next chp.
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Well written out plot wise and characters. I like how you wrote out the thought for each character(Naruto is best.) I've been following your story since you posted it on the itanaru livejounal community. I enjoyed how you wrote out Itachi, you've really kept him in character. He's really a hard character to write, and with out making him to OOC, and also I liked how Tsunade and Jiraiya act throught out the story. Love the NejiShika. I hope you don't end up fully killing off Gaara, i mean like let him be saved by Chiyo or something. I'll cry if he dies, I love Gaara so much! Hes...special... he's Gaara. haha... Keep up the great work!!! p.s. What's going to happen with Sasuke?