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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OY! OY!!
That was soooooooooooooooo sad!! >o< But true! Tsunade should have kicked some defiant shinobi ass!! Hell, I would've! Stupid ignorant fucktards!! GRR!! How dare they disrespect Naruto!! Admittedly, I've never actually cared too much for the Naruto character because, well, he doesn't seem very realistic. He does garner TONS of respect though!! ^_^ However, your version of Naruto, while still capturing his trademark brightness and tenacity, you make him seem VERY human! I mean, for a normal human, you're bound to be insecure if you've been a pariah all your life! HE HAS ISSUES! WOOT!!
And yes, you did a very good example of the suspension bridge effect! ^_^ Y'know. where your natural wiring gets a little goofy when confronted with to much danger/fear? It can equate to anger or sex...depending...GOOD TIMES!!
And I LIKE possesive Itachi. He's cold. He's ruthless. He's smexy, dammit!! UPDATE SOON!!
That was soooooooooooooooo sad!! >o< But true! Tsunade should have kicked some defiant shinobi ass!! Hell, I would've! Stupid ignorant fucktards!! GRR!! How dare they disrespect Naruto!! Admittedly, I've never actually cared too much for the Naruto character because, well, he doesn't seem very realistic. He does garner TONS of respect though!! ^_^ However, your version of Naruto, while still capturing his trademark brightness and tenacity, you make him seem VERY human! I mean, for a normal human, you're bound to be insecure if you've been a pariah all your life! HE HAS ISSUES! WOOT!!
And yes, you did a very good example of the suspension bridge effect! ^_^ Y'know. where your natural wiring gets a little goofy when confronted with to much danger/fear? It can equate to anger or sex...depending...GOOD TIMES!!
And I LIKE possesive Itachi. He's cold. He's ruthless. He's smexy, dammit!! UPDATE SOON!!
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to cry. How could you just stop in the middle of the story like that? ^_^ XD
This has been awseom so far, your style in writing and how well you did the personalities of every one was perfect. I will admit I don't completely like the Idea of Naruto's lack of protest to Itachi's sudden desire for sex O_O
How ever this story is so amazing, im so into it, i love the whole darn thing. I can't wait till you post another chapter!! Yesh please continue.
I want to find out if Naruto will ever be able to go back to his village...or is he gunna suddenly decide he wants to stay with itachi O_O
Please continue it's marvalous!!
This has been awseom so far, your style in writing and how well you did the personalities of every one was perfect. I will admit I don't completely like the Idea of Naruto's lack of protest to Itachi's sudden desire for sex O_O
How ever this story is so amazing, im so into it, i love the whole darn thing. I can't wait till you post another chapter!! Yesh please continue.
I want to find out if Naruto will ever be able to go back to his village...or is he gunna suddenly decide he wants to stay with itachi O_O
Please continue it's marvalous!!
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May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMFG *_* *spasms* THAT Was so Fucking Hot *_* *dies from lack of saliva* *coughs* Ok... i'm calm now ^^;
great chapter~ ^_^ I cant work out why you did... becuase you were frustrated there wasn't any hot yaoi loving? =P (i know im insane >_>; )
Anywho...~ I can't wait for the next chapter! *_* Update soon please *glomps*
great chapter~ ^_^ I cant work out why you did... becuase you were frustrated there wasn't any hot yaoi loving? =P (i know im insane >_>; )
Anywho...~ I can't wait for the next chapter! *_* Update soon please *glomps*
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May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*crawls towards the authot, gasping* Need..more...
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O I think my jaw just dislocated.
I read all of this is just one go, and MAN am I impressed!! I am very much addicted to this story now!! I was kinda hesitant at first with the pairings mentioned, but the beauty of your writing is just captivating! I can't beleive how genuine and well plotted this is! I mean, this is THE best Naruto fanfic I've come across! I'm not lying! I REALLY enjoy how slow and steady this is going because it helps me to understand your characters better! I especially enjoy the way you fill in some plot holes from the original story, i.e. Gaara's reaction to the Kazekage thing!
And I am doubly awed by your descriptive nature! I have to say my favorite part, though morbid, was the description of the pain Naruto was going through when Kyuubi was being "extracted"! WOW! I FELT it!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!
Keep the pace you want to go at because I for one am thoroughly enjoying it! It's much better than quicky story, you know? We can only take so many one-shot smut fests...And even if there isn't much smut involved, the quality and depth of the storyline is enough to get any hard-core fan addicted!
This is a damn impressive piece of work! I really can't wait for the next update! ^_^
I read all of this is just one go, and MAN am I impressed!! I am very much addicted to this story now!! I was kinda hesitant at first with the pairings mentioned, but the beauty of your writing is just captivating! I can't beleive how genuine and well plotted this is! I mean, this is THE best Naruto fanfic I've come across! I'm not lying! I REALLY enjoy how slow and steady this is going because it helps me to understand your characters better! I especially enjoy the way you fill in some plot holes from the original story, i.e. Gaara's reaction to the Kazekage thing!
And I am doubly awed by your descriptive nature! I have to say my favorite part, though morbid, was the description of the pain Naruto was going through when Kyuubi was being "extracted"! WOW! I FELT it!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!
Keep the pace you want to go at because I for one am thoroughly enjoying it! It's much better than quicky story, you know? We can only take so many one-shot smut fests...And even if there isn't much smut involved, the quality and depth of the storyline is enough to get any hard-core fan addicted!
This is a damn impressive piece of work! I really can't wait for the next update! ^_^
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May 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYYAYAYYAYAAYYAYYAYAYY AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!
WHEEEEEEEEEE I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER! LOL you know, when I saw you had updated, my reaction was, "OH YEAH BABY SHE UPDATYE! SHE UPDATED!!!" LOL
WHEEEEEEEEEE I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER! LOL you know, when I saw you had updated, my reaction was, "OH YEAH BABY SHE UPDATYE! SHE UPDATED!!!" LOL
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May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter ! I can't wait for the next one. Thanx !!!
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May 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic update soon
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May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG T_T Poor Naruto ;_; Poor Jiraiya T_T poor everyone really T_T ^^;
Please please update soon ^_^
Please please update soon ^_^
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May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeeeeeeee!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Omgeh....I need more...nooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!