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for Winter Release

by Cepheus

person Hinata_Hyuuga
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I love this story. you have such a good writing style and you play the chara's soo well. PLEASE DON'T LET NARU-CHAN DIEEEE! I wanna see how you write a lemon scene. It must be good ^_^
person Elric Maxwell
schedule May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! You gotta update! I'm on the edge of my seat!!! What happens next!? >.<; EM
person Liah
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated XD With such a great chapter too ^^ Man Itachi can be mean ^^; Ah well... i cant wait for the next one, i lvoe this! ^_^
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter, and hooope you will update very, very soon!
person Kellie
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'm a huge Gaara x Naruto fan, but I can't wait for the Itachi x Naruto moment to show ^__^ Keep up the great writing ^__^
person Liah
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm glad Gaara finally realised there IS someone out there who understands him. He's really lucky for Naruto to be there, the guys like the friendlist guy in the world probably Oo

But i really like this chapter, it shows how two people from different villagers can get along even when one they both have suffered so much.

Great emotionalish chapter ^^
person Gin
schedule April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=D that was awesome
I loved it i loved it i loved it.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whahaah awesome, loved it!
This OC guy seems kinda cool....UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON XDXD...yeah...XDXDXDXDXD

person Liah
schedule April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude that was frekkin awesome! XD Shame Naruto cant work out what he was doing was training ^^; But thats Naruto heh =)

I cant wait to read more! ^^ I love this <3
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww. that shikaXneji scene was too sweet. i just love shikamaru. he's just too cool. anyway, great work. naruto is on the move and we get to see gaara soon! but now, i wonder. the whole itachixnaruto thing. will he be encountering itachi every now and then during his travels or will it be a one time appearance between the two that will leave a very impressional effect on naruto? either way, we'll find out eventually, right? later.

~Devious