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for Winter Release

by Cepheus

person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD lmao that's kinda freaky lol ^_^

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THE CHAPTER XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
Hurry wit hthe neeeext!! I wonder when Itachi will meet with Naruto again...:\ XDXDXD <333333333333333333333333333
person Gin
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jeez, that was awesome.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
I can't wait to see Naruto get
kidnapped.
Let's hope Itachi rapes him,
because that would be a hot scene.
Aw this was sad in the sense
that the villagers were all faggots.
ANYWAYS I'm looking
forward to the next chapter.
person xBunni
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This fic is really moving along nicely~ ^^ I love it!! The start of this chapter was a little slow but it got on a better speed as it progressed. Did you have to leave us with a cliffhanger though~??? ^^;; *sigh* Ja, gambatte!! I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter!! Matte, ne~
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn, that's messed up. those cowards. trying to kill him in his sleep. i can't wait for them to get what's coming to them. anyway, great job. looking foward to your next update.
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are such a good writer for being Italian! I LOVE THIS STORY! =DD That's so cool, I'm half Italian, my dad was from Trieste...eh I think that's how you spell it! :'D I was learning Italian but then my dad moved away so I didn't do it (I so regret it now) yeah....so as soon as I'm done learning Japanese I'm gonna learn Italian! ^O^

Eh...err I guess you didn't want to hear that LOL <3 love ya story ^^
person seamless
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story is turning out, your characterizations work out very well.
Not being a big fan of ItaNaru (I'm a big cilche SasuNaru-shipper xD), this fic actually works out for the most part unlike every other fic of this pairing I've read that does nothing but abruply butcher them so badly (or is way too far-fetched) or my liking.
Notes:
-Itachi and Sasuke are about 5 years apart in age difference from what I've read
-From the translations I've seen Itachi's quote when he pinned Sasuke against the wall was somehting like "You are weak, why are you weak? Because you lack...hatred".

So yeah, please continue =]
person PersonaThatYouDunKnow
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@_@ omgz. i luffed it!! NICE WORK! :3
person AlPoptart
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story has brought me on the verge of tears. T_T You are a skilled writer. The story has so much depth in what it is really like for Naruto. I love it. Please continue, I dying to read more.
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love love lovelovelovelove ehm, hope Itachi comes soon!!!!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so good. your writing style is excellent, i love the way your'e not rushing things and your chapters are long too! needless to say, i look foward to the next update. ^__^

~Devious