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by Cepheus

person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heya! ;) Loved the new chapter <33333333333
I check the site everyday to see if you update <3 if I had any friends who liked ItaNaru, I would definitely recommend this, but none do! Che XD
person MizfitxBunni
schedule April 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kakkoi~!! >< *squee* I like it that you've not gone with the usual 'fall deeply in love at first sight' sort of thing, I mean I do like that but only in more humour oriented fics. ^^ I can't wait to find out the rookie nine's reactions when they find out that naruto has been kidnapped.. *dum dum dum dummmm <-- dramatic evil music ^^;;*
Ano sa ano sa... Please update soon~ ^^ I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Gambatte cepheus-san!! *gives appreciation dango and green tea*
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule April 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WWWWWWWWWWWWWICKED I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVED THE NEW CHAPTER! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!
person Bookworm51485
schedule April 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I've been looking for good Naruto fanfics and it looks like I've finally found one. And it's not a SasuNaru story, which is a plus since it seems like that is all people write anymore. You have a few spelling/grammar problems in the story, but it's nothing overwhelming and nothing a good beta couldn't find a fix. Though of course if you got a beta, unless you chose to post the unedited then repost the edited chapter, your updates would come slower. What a trade off:) I'm glad that your Naruto isn't going to be a Super!Naruto. I can't stand those, I especially hate those stories that make Naruto like superman but in order to try to fix this they decide to bring in someone for him to get his ass kicked by. I'm actually working on one author right now who's story is heading in that direction. People don't seem to like a gradual increase in strength, they just want him to be superman now no matter how ridiculous it is. Anyways that's all I got really, I like your beginning and I hope to see an update soon and that you finish the story, somehow it seems like all the stories I like start out good, are updated regularly then they just disappear. It makes me sad, you don't want to make me sad, do you?
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule April 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh booya! I can finally review!! I loved it, I loved it soooooooooooooo much! It's awesome! Itachi/Naruto is so god damn rare!!!!!
I hope there will be lemons too!!! XDXDXD looooved it!!!!
Please, pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update soon! If you don't I'll....go mad!!
much love yo
person raven
schedule April 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack dont' leave it there.... Man oh man i wanna bitch slap that 'bunny' anbu to the next country... Hope to see more soon~
person Acacia Chizi (Mourning Starz)
schedule April 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter, it makes the story seem very appealing. Well, the Ita/Naru made it sound appealing, but the first chapter adds onto it! So much, I hope you're not the person that'll forget to update, lol. Seriously now, it has some spark in it, which is good, but hopefully you have >that< plot that'll make it flare. It won't be a good story if you don't. Oh well, best of lucks with this one. Oh, and I agree; I'd pick any of those three (plus NEJI-KUUUUN) over Sassy any day. Ja~
person ,..,
schedule April 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like this, as it was well-written and interesting, and I will check back for updates.