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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you sort of use canon to support your new timeline... The part where Naruto escaped the Akatsuki hideout was really powerful, and he seems really IC throughout the plot. I also like how Naruto matures, and how you write his thought processes. I find that the italicized sections for Itachi tend to be rather rambly, and could probably be condensed a bit. :P
I look forward to reading more! ^_^
I look forward to reading more! ^_^
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait till the next chapter! XD
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated. Finally!!!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd stay away from Itachi if i were him. I can't wait to find out what Itachi's next move is.
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itachi!!!!!!!!!
I love you.
I love you.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if your going to give Naruto a total makeover. I hope so. That would be so great when he meets team 7 again.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW!!! OH WOW!!! YOU ARE JUST SO AMAZING. GIVE US MORE OF THE DROOL-WORTHY ITACHI.
POOR NARUTO. HE'S GETTING THE MOST PAINFUL TRAINING FROM EVERYONE.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR HIS TRAINING W/ THE "CRAZY" LADY.
POOR NARUTO. HE'S GETTING THE MOST PAINFUL TRAINING FROM EVERYONE.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR HIS TRAINING W/ THE "CRAZY" LADY.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I AM SPEECHLESS. YOU ARE SO UNBELIEVABLY GREAT. I CANNOT BELIEVE HOW HOT THAT WAS. ITACHI IS STILL THE BAD GUY BUT I REALLY WANT IT TO WORK FOR OUR FAVORITE CHARACTERS. MINE AT LEAST. NOW I REALLY WANT HIM TO GET CAPTURED AGAIN. COME ON ITACHI GET YOU SEXY ASS BACK TO KONOHA & GET YOUR BLOND BACK BECAUSE I WANT TO READ MORE OF THAT SMEXY SEX.
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I love how much consideration you've taken with each character and I absolutely love how you have been developing Itachi. He's such a complex character to write and I believe you have done an excellent job. This is high on my faves list.