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Woooooowwwwwwww... I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed it so much! I really look forward to seeing more of your fics! I've already read some of them and I hope you continue with them!

hi! i just started read your story. There are not enough interesting fics with such pairing. I hope that nwxt chapters will be as well as first. By!

Yatta! I hope you update this soon, 'cause it's really good! And I can't wait for the others to find out about Itachi...*low, evil chuckle* I really like this story, but there are a few things that bug me whenever I read it:

You keep writing chocked, but it should be spelled choked. This just bugs me because, with the way you spell it, it would be pronounced like CHALK, not CHOKE. That was just one of the main things.

There were a couple of other little things, but they weren't as troubling. Oh, and in either this or the last chapter using is spelled useing, which would make it pronounced any number of odd ways. Don't you just LOVE ENGLISH?! (feel the sarcasm.) Stupid English grammar and spelling. Teehee!

If I remember any other little things, I'll let you know! Otherwise, keep up the good work!

This story is really great!^_^

wow
Great story!
I started to read this a couple of days ago. Theres not that many good, long Itachi/Naruto stories.
I like the flow and it's not confussing to read(which is really good for me:D)
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Update soon! PLEASE!

hey, its ur favorite reviewer! omg, i am so loving this story!!! so i think i already told u that i got a super good grade on the book project i did on this story. u may be thinking ' wait....the story isnt finished though..' , but my teacher said she wanted us to hav "creative" questions so she gave us things like "...if u were to search in your main characters sock droor (omg, i cant spell it O.o), wat would u find?" so ya, she said my book was "different". tch, shes a bit of a homophobe, so she wasnt overly excited. ya so, im reaaaaaly lookin forward to the next chap!

Wow! I've just read everything in one sitting *exhausted* just because I wanted to know what happens next! This is my first Itachi/Naruto fic, and I think you have me hooked *grins*. I was worried at first that you'd take the easy way out with several bits and go cliche/no-plot-smut-fic, but you've done a fantastic job with actually making the pairing work well (which, for that, you need to go slowly). I was also really happy that you didn't make Sakura a complete bitch, which so many people seem to.
So - absolutely LOVING this story, can't wait to read the next chapter :)

I really like this story so far
Its an excellent piece of work
Im eager to read any new chapters :-)
Keep up with the gr8 work?

i just want to say that i completely love this fic, and it is by far the best one i have ever read over my years of reading fanfiction. every time i see that a new chapter is posted i relive the same feeling that i use to experience as a child when christmas was near, one of happiness and anticipation. keep up your great work and i hope that you update as soon as you can.

UPDATE!! UPDATE!! ~ again ~ please!? I NEED YOU TO! And also update Colourless Vanity if u could! I love that one too! I really actually enjoyed this chapter. I love Kakashi, but I don't know much about Obito other then that he was an Uchiha, and also one of the members of Kakashi's genin squad when they were young. I can't say I'm a fan, (simply 'cause I love KakaIru) but I don't know yet! I'll have to continue my reading and watching of NARUTO!! YES! lol.. when do u think you'll update?