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by Cepheus

person ABC
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! this story is the shit! ive never read anything like it before! u fukcing rox!
person w00t
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg1 so cute! *huggles the gaara/naru*
person pumking
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love you, marry me, have my babies!
person Evol
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are the naru-fic GOD! *gets down on knees and begins to worship*
person Anna
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story never cease to amuse me...
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!! IT'S AN UPDATE!!!!! :D I'm happy to see that this story is still going, it's definitely one of my favorites. And it's ItaNaru which just makes it that much better. I wasn't at all disappointed with this new chapter. Just because there's no action doesn't mean that nothing happened. We got see Naruto wake up and be completely concious of his freedom and those around him. His interaction with Gaara was interesting, almost cute. I was wondering how you'd go about that meeting, I liked it. And I like Kakashi's new attitude and the insight we gained into him. And of course, Naruto's feelings about the situation with Itachi. It's almost similar to the guilt and feelings that a person who'd been raped would have, it's interesting. A lot of things about this chapter are interesting:D I can't wait until Itachi and Naruto come back together in this story, and the reactions of those around them (and Sasuke). I can't wait to see how your going to get them together in the story, definitely wouldn't be easy since you not going the route of many who write ItaNaru and making either Itachi good or Naruto bad. I was wondering about one thing though, it seemed like Naruto and Itachi had sex relatively often. I would think including not too long before he escaped, though with the lack of real time tracking it would be hard to make that determination. It doesn't seem like Itachi really took much care with preparation and avoiding damage. And so with kyuubi locked away and not doing any healing wouldn't some damage have stayed? And when the medic-nins at Suna were healing him, wouldn't that have been something they'd find? Maybe not leading to the correct conclusion but to a logical misassumption (is that even a word)? Does that make any sense. I swear I'm having such trouble making sense these days, even to myself. What I mean is wouldn't they have found some left-over anal damage and made the incorrect assumption that he'd been raped by the Akatsuki? Or did kyuubi heal him or was there no damage? Am I completely barking up the wrong tree? Yeah, I'll shut up now:D I loved this new chapter and I hope that this story will gain a higher place on your priority list and that another new update won't take too long.
person AnA La Pana83
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter alot. I didn't think that there wasn't much going on, it's nice to see Naruto at peace for a moment anyway. Now that he's safe so to speak, i'm wondering whats gonna happen next and how Itachi plays into this. Man, they are still after him and have no idea its basically useless to extract Kyuubi now, ha. That moment between Gaara and Naruto though was really so sweet! I was smiling as a read it. He does have a lot to be grateful to Naruto for, and it's nice to see that Kakashi has a heart! Pls update soon!
person darktoy
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know this specific fanfic it's like a... Totemt to me. It was because of this that I got into Naruto fanfiction... So take the responsability for creating an Itanaru fangirl!!!!!XD

Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next glimpse of this fic. And thank you, finally Sasuke gets some sense into that thick skull of his...

(Damn Uchihas... *grumbles*
person sanzo
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story. please update!!!!
person Jaded Alone x
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Of course I was going to review! But mannn, I bet it's gonna
take a while to get more into the narutachi stuff -sob- Im so glad
you updated even though nothing big happened!!!! Still! I stay devoted
to this fic! ^_____^ -sends much love to you awesome author-ess
skillz!!!!