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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was avery good story to bad you never finished it, as the storyline is so interesting and the last chapter had me on edge. Love the pairing.
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update again?
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very provocative,I like it alot.The dreamy victim is a powerful architype(though not entirely Jungian but he was a man so allowences must be made).Itachi is insidious,peeling her like an onion indeed.I am looking forward to the sexually liberated Sakura even though she sprung a dreamy victim...but thats how it goes in real life too eh?Nice work.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY^_____________________^..now just update again!!^_^
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heya Vortex! Long time no talk, muahahaha! I'm looking forward to reading more soon! I can't wait to see Itachi again too!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh update and email me when you do^^
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An awesome story. Not everyday you find a good Itachi x Sakura fic. Please, PLEAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE,,,
continue.
continue.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YO!
well i finally read your little fic and i have to say i really like it.
although about the tsukiyomi i dont believe its a way to READ minds like they said earlier in the series all they are doing is hypnotizing and making educated guesses most of the time.
id like to see him use the mangekyo to mutiply both him and her and force her to have the sensation of sex with more then one consciousness....that would be cool.
happy writing
krickitat
well i finally read your little fic and i have to say i really like it.
although about the tsukiyomi i dont believe its a way to READ minds like they said earlier in the series all they are doing is hypnotizing and making educated guesses most of the time.
id like to see him use the mangekyo to mutiply both him and her and force her to have the sensation of sex with more then one consciousness....that would be cool.
happy writing
krickitat
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written to say the least. I adore Itachi x Sakura and I just pray you update soon. Know what the best part is though? You actually know how to spell, and I spotted no grammatical errors whatsoever (which is definitely a plus). All in all I give you a 5/5!
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April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is the second chapter in tsukiyomi too? Don't tell, I wanna wait to find out, I am just wondering out loud! hehe. Damn! The second chapter is hoTT too! I can't wait to read more. It is not just the smut that is good (while you write it well), it is the fact that there are not a lot of errors to detract from the story, and the maturity that shows in your writing. This story is not like so many Ita/Saku out there where Itachi rapes Sakura to get at Sasuke, etc. You have gotten into Itachi's mind here (while I don't think he is this much of a perv for real, I do like to imagine a pervy Itachi Muahahahaha!) meaning that you have thought this through, or at least the characters and who they are and how they react, and it shows in your writing. So keep up the good work! I look forward to more!
Are you planning on introducing Saucy later in the story? I know that in the first chappie you said that Itachi was doing this to fuck with Saucy.
Are you planning on introducing Saucy later in the story? I know that in the first chappie you said that Itachi was doing this to fuck with Saucy.