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by nocturne

person Me
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Pointless
person meliny
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pointless yet entirely funny
person The_Yaoi_Fairie
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's IT?!!!!!

Oh yeah and...
"I can smell the one I had two days ago."
O.O Um. That's... not healthy. I think your eating habits disturb me more than the fic.

Please post a sequel so we know how Naruto's annoyingness and your philly cheese steak come out.
person Laeris
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like what use to happen between me and my brothers. Twitch, twitch, whack! always made me feel better. Cute keep going.