rate_review Reviews

This is really good! I love it! +++++

Even though this was a challenge, it was extremely original. Stories on this site are always predictable and have the same plot, but I really liked this. Since it's a challenge, I doubt you'll write more chapter for this story. I really look forward to more stories like this.

HA! Frankly the most plausable get-together for them that I've read yet. Hilarious too. I appreciate all the deliciously vivid detail as well. Thanks!

WOW DUDE! Wow...WOW! That was the best HET i have ever read. I am all smiles!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD For real. I love this. The way you portray Sasuke is ADORABLE! I kept laughing every time he thought something stupid as they were fucking...bwahahahahahaha! It seemed totally like how he would think. One thing i noticed that you might want to fix is this “Sasuke,” he gasped. Her thighs tried to snap closed once again, but he strengthened his own leg locking hers tight. lolololol. That was i think the only mistake i saw. Oh wait, you used the word taught where i think you meant "taut" (i made that mistake in one of my fics too and i have yet to fix it, lololol)This was your first lemon? Holy crap dude...this is amazing! very nice. Good attention to detail, cute charicterizations. The end was good too. Great PWP. I hope to read more from you in the future!!! Oh yeah and i love the slug thing...gyah! So good, so good. Much praise! *tackle glomp* (^-^)v