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Lol that's fucked up good work a++++++++±++++±

okkkkkkkkkkk...

Hello! I'd just like to let you know that I like yaoi fanfiction, particularly of the SasuNaru/NaruSasu or KakaIru/IruKaka varieties within the Naruto fandom, yet I am appalled by this story. It isn't because it's in the yuri section. Not at all. I am perfectly willing to read stories containing het, shonen-ai, or shojo-ai as long as it is well-written and not explicit (though my standards are higher for shojo-ai since I'm a straight woman and will only read it if I like the rest of the plot quite a bit). This is a poorly-written piece of junk that gives yaoi readers and writers a bad name. I'd make a point to add a well-written shojo-ai story or two to the site, but frankly I prefer fluff (which this site doesn't typically contain) so my author account is for a different site.

I'm sure you're wondering how I stumbled upon this sorry excuse for a fanfiction, then.

Well...

You've been ANBUed! The fanfiction ANBU is at http:// community.livejournal .com/ ff_anbu/. They pick apart bad fanfiction. Their analysis of your "story" is at http:// community.livejournal .com/ ff_anbu/103265.html#cutid1. I'm completely unaffiliated with the group, but I take great pleasure in letting you know that the group has acknowledged your spectacular lack of talent, tact, and/or intelligence.

No fair! I like NaruSasu as much as the next fangirl but I still want to see some Yuri love from Sakura and Ino instead of bashing them to death!! (runs away crying) Yow meanie!

you should of made it with INO and Sakura having action

XD! Pshaw, I like both pairings and found this rather hilarious.

LMFAO!XDHA,HA
I personaly HATE these but I thought I coud use a laughf...
And I got one.
*Starts laughfing again falls on floor and does not stop*
"Wanna tape some NaruSasu?"HA,HA
Funny.Write more.
Ja ne,
Yuki

This...is what really pisses me off about Yaoi fangirls like you.
I'm going to have to agree with TeaRose up there.

Besides...in the words of Margaret Cho, your pussy probably tastes like Lysol. What man or woman would want to eat it?

You deserve to have your vagina sewn up and your clitoris removed, so that the only pleasure you can feel would be from your butt.

P.S. I think breast removal surgery and a few injections of testosterone might help also. Too bad genital surgery for FtM's sucks (at least at the present time.) And I have to warn you that gay men are very bitchy. They're really concerned about what's between your legs, and if you can't give it to them, well...

Okay, now this just irks me about Yaoi fangirls.
You'll think it's hot simply because Naruto is doing Sasuke up the ass.
But you'll absolutely *shudder* when the thought of Hinata kissing Ino comes to mind.
Don't mislead people like that and post a "yuri" fanfic when you're really just advertising your male-on-male erotica. That's not only insulting, but really questions our tolerance for the Yaoi fangirl--and whether we should have any tolerance for them or not. Because quite frankly...you're the most ANNOYING living beings that have ever had the opportunity to write fanfiction.

Not so much a fandome...as it is a DISEASE.