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May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dont worry im a bi-sexual yaoi freak who was really really bord and I liked it in a funny way hinita was cute but come one shes always cute and I wanna see kabuto and orichimaru get it on personaly ^.~
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May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you're a real bitch, i hope you know. if you don't like yuri, you should have left the category alone. it's people like you that make this world a shitty place to live in. go to hell.
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May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuuuuuh...yeah...Um, you DO know that this story is really stupid right?
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April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree that there isn't enough yuri and this section need more fics. What I don't agree on is the NaruSasu action, personally I DON'T read NaruSasu, only SasuNaru, hehehe. Obviously, I don't hate Sakura, just the fact that she's such an obssessed Sasuke fangirl. She would be a very decent female charac' without it. *sigh* if only she could be a lesbian. Hehehe.
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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Flames? I was just joking around.
Eh, I'll admit Sakura isn't the most interesting character in the series (I'm a Hinata guy, m'self), but I do have fun watching her (you're right about the Inner Sakura thing though. We really need some more of that craziness. At least Tsunade seems to be rubbing off on her.). And I really can't see how her personality is any worse than Sasuke's, considering the entirety of bishounen-angst-emoboy's character seems to consist of the following words.
"Kill Itachi. Kill Itachi. Kill Itachi. Kill Itachi. (repeat ad infinitum)"
I mean, it's like watching a goddamned robot. Of course Sakura doesn't have a chance with him. NO ONE does, since he's utterly uninterested in romance (or even short flings). Eventually, he'll probably grab some random girl to help him repopulate the Uchiha clan, but all she'll be is a baby factory.
Not that any of that has anything really to do with this story/joke/whatever-the-hell-you-want-to-call-it, but it's just something that's been bothering me for a while. Anyhow, good luck with whatever you're working on now, but could ya do me just a LITTLE favor? If you're going to write something like this again, make it an Omake (extra) in one of your own fanfics. In case you're wondering what the Hell I'm talking about, I mean when you write something like this, tack it on to the end of an actual fic, rather than publishing it seperately. The reason for this is that while your fellow yaoi fangirls will get a kick out of stuff like this, the rest of us just twitch. Thanks!
(Memo to all Sasuke fans: DON'T fucking yell at me for insulting him. All it does is get me annoyed. And besides, he's so easy to mock, I can't help it.)
(Auxilary memo: Like my first review, nothing but the last paragraph was meant to be taken seriously. I'm sure most of you figured that out already, but there are always the few who don't get it...)
Eh, I'll admit Sakura isn't the most interesting character in the series (I'm a Hinata guy, m'self), but I do have fun watching her (you're right about the Inner Sakura thing though. We really need some more of that craziness. At least Tsunade seems to be rubbing off on her.). And I really can't see how her personality is any worse than Sasuke's, considering the entirety of bishounen-angst-emoboy's character seems to consist of the following words.
"Kill Itachi. Kill Itachi. Kill Itachi. Kill Itachi. (repeat ad infinitum)"
I mean, it's like watching a goddamned robot. Of course Sakura doesn't have a chance with him. NO ONE does, since he's utterly uninterested in romance (or even short flings). Eventually, he'll probably grab some random girl to help him repopulate the Uchiha clan, but all she'll be is a baby factory.
Not that any of that has anything really to do with this story/joke/whatever-the-hell-you-want-to-call-it, but it's just something that's been bothering me for a while. Anyhow, good luck with whatever you're working on now, but could ya do me just a LITTLE favor? If you're going to write something like this again, make it an Omake (extra) in one of your own fanfics. In case you're wondering what the Hell I'm talking about, I mean when you write something like this, tack it on to the end of an actual fic, rather than publishing it seperately. The reason for this is that while your fellow yaoi fangirls will get a kick out of stuff like this, the rest of us just twitch. Thanks!
(Memo to all Sasuke fans: DON'T fucking yell at me for insulting him. All it does is get me annoyed. And besides, he's so easy to mock, I can't help it.)
(Auxilary memo: Like my first review, nothing but the last paragraph was meant to be taken seriously. I'm sure most of you figured that out already, but there are always the few who don't get it...)
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April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lololol yeah i read this the other day but i had to go to work so i couldn't review...lololol! i laughed though...you are evil....i was all DUDE! YAOI FAIRIE! Yuri?? Het?? What is the world coming to?? lololollololololol...i like this one...though it is a little mean...XD yet it is profound. as i expect to see coming from you! XD i am actually kinda liking Sakura now...she is showing a bit of affection for naruto chan...lol and she took a knife in the belly...and got poisoned....i just hope she decks sasuke at least once like she did with sai that one time...then her suckyness will be vindicated! XD the hinata thing in this was funny...lol and yeah the overwhelming sasunaru...XD guh...i am braindead right now...i should stop talking...XP (back to HW...or not...XP) I'm waiting for you to leave some yaoi under my pillow BTW...XD
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April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs evilly* Yes! Yes! I bask in your flames!
Actually, Sakura doesn't get in the way of my yaoi fantasies at all, seems how even in the series she has NO CHANCE of getting with Sasuke, and so is not a threat.
I actually do have the legitimate complaint that her character just sucks. "Inner Sakura" was the only interesting aspect of her, which quickly disappears. I think it's because Kishimoto is trying to (and succeeding) represent her as a normal girl. Her personality is so plain, boring, and predictable that I have no interest in her. She doesn't even have a backstory. And then, of course, seeing everyone else complain about her makes her seem even worse than she already is.
Although she does get a little more badass after learning under Tsunade.
Actually, Sakura doesn't get in the way of my yaoi fantasies at all, seems how even in the series she has NO CHANCE of getting with Sasuke, and so is not a threat.
I actually do have the legitimate complaint that her character just sucks. "Inner Sakura" was the only interesting aspect of her, which quickly disappears. I think it's because Kishimoto is trying to (and succeeding) represent her as a normal girl. Her personality is so plain, boring, and predictable that I have no interest in her. She doesn't even have a backstory. And then, of course, seeing everyone else complain about her makes her seem even worse than she already is.
Although she does get a little more badass after learning under Tsunade.
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April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great. Just great. The Yaoi fangirls have so overrun this fandom that they are now posting ADVERTISEMENTS FOR THEIR SECTION in the Yuri area. Does no one care about the straight male readers (or the lesbians) anymore?
Ah, but I rant. In all seriousness... okay, there is nothing I can say about this that is remotely serious, since the entire thing was obviously just a joke. Hey, no biggie. We can take a little humor. I mean, I'm sure you wouldn't be too pissed off if, say, I wrote a fic where Naruto was about to be raped by Sasuke (exactly HOW many times has that plotline been used?), only to RIP OFF THE BASTARD'S NUTS!
(notices evil glares from Yaoi fangirls for threatening their precious Sasuke)
Err... then again, maybe you would.
Ironically enough, that makes me more tempted to write something like that.
I do have one little question though. What the Hell is everyone's problem with Sakura? I mean, seriously, what has she done to deserve everyone ripping on her like this? Ino I can understand, but with Sakura it's like you just hate her because she gets in the way of your precious Yaoi fantasies.
(side note: Like the fic itself, all of this review except for that last question was a joke. Anyone who takes it seriously will be severely laughed at.)
Ah, but I rant. In all seriousness... okay, there is nothing I can say about this that is remotely serious, since the entire thing was obviously just a joke. Hey, no biggie. We can take a little humor. I mean, I'm sure you wouldn't be too pissed off if, say, I wrote a fic where Naruto was about to be raped by Sasuke (exactly HOW many times has that plotline been used?), only to RIP OFF THE BASTARD'S NUTS!
(notices evil glares from Yaoi fangirls for threatening their precious Sasuke)
Err... then again, maybe you would.
Ironically enough, that makes me more tempted to write something like that.
I do have one little question though. What the Hell is everyone's problem with Sakura? I mean, seriously, what has she done to deserve everyone ripping on her like this? Ino I can understand, but with Sakura it's like you just hate her because she gets in the way of your precious Yaoi fantasies.
(side note: Like the fic itself, all of this review except for that last question was a joke. Anyone who takes it seriously will be severely laughed at.)