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for Kindred

by Maldoror

person mimi
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated. I didn't respond to the last chapter so I am kind of responding to both chapters now. I am very glad that Lee and Gaara decided to keep the kids. I wasn't really sure how you were going to handle that. I also enjoyed Gaara's typically upfront approach to telling Chiro that he and Lee were lovers and not roommates. I also loved Lee's reaction. He can be sooooo cute. I also like how you continually show how Gaara still struggles with his inner demon(s).I can't wait for the next chapter... and hopefully more Gaara and Lee lovin'.
P.S I also looked around for other stories you have written i.e. Kakashi/Iruka etc. I enjoyed them all. You are a great writer and as someone who teaches students how to write it is a pleasure to read well written work.
person mimi a.k.a. mimis
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just reading over reviews and I saw another mimi....*laughing* so the last review (the oneresponding to 2 chapters was me and not the other mimi. I will now add an*s* to the end of my name to tell us apart! Can't wait till the next capter.
person DeviLived
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I really enjoyed it.

I liked how you had Temari helping Gaara from behind her fan, that was smart.

I would say more but I've got to go downstairs -_-.

Update soon!!
person melissa
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your work . Your storys were the first that I ever read of Lee Garra pairing . Please keep wriiting the story Kindred .I love it .
person Trollmia
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter caused my breathe to malefunction and then... Awwwww so cute... A perfect blend once again. The way you're describing things, it's just amazing. It pulls you in and make a you a part of the story. It's like going to the movies. You can really see what's happening. That's a gift.
person DeviLived
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh, I really enjoyed that chapter, it was very well written.

I love how you describe Gaara's emotions! They're always so realistic and beautifully written. I like how you included the title near the end, intentional or not it was still cool.

I really love Gaara and Lee together, they totally balence each other out. I like how you make Lee be able to read Gaara so well, it shows how deep their releationship is. I'm currently trying to convince one of my friends that Gaara/Lee is a good thing :D. I'm going to get her to read Diplomatic Relations soon :D:D

Anyways, don't let life get you down :D and don't feel as if you're obligated to update this! Writing should be an escape now a job!! :D:D:D:D:D

Keep it up!
person mimi
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey I am soooooo glad you updated. After reading the first two Kindred chapters (a couple of months ago)I went to your live journal and read Diplomatic Relations. It was sooo fantastic I stayed up till 2am to finish it!! ^-^. My eyes were sooo tired that day but it was soooo worth it. Since then I have been checking your live journal (weekly!)and reading your side stories(Chicken Soup et. al.) and now Anbu. You are such a great writer and I really enjoy how you write and express what the characters are thinking. Plus the smut is greaaat too!!! However, because of you Lee and Gaara are now my favorite pairing! I can't read any other pairing and enjoy it as well. *sigh* its o.k. I forgive you *nods seriously* One final note- I do not have an icon so I am not sure that my review on your live journal would post, so that is why.... I read there and respond here. If I can post on your journal it would be easier. Next time I will try.
I can't wait for the next chapter and I am sorry to hear it is ending soon....*waits a few seconds* what other Lee-Garra stuff are you writing!?!?! - no pressure I swear....just kiddin.

















person Trollmia
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh, just comes in her to kiss you.... You know - you are a goddess of writing...
person DevilLived
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, awesome job.

I was a bit 'WHOA' when we jumped from day 6 to day 24 but you warned us so it wasn't really a bad shock. I totally love the scenes with Gaara and the kids! They're always so...cute, cool, deep and so on. Awesome chapter, as per usual. I liked the ending when both Gaara and Lee started running at the same time :D hehe.

Update soon, alright?
person evol
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"we need this..."

translation:

"my reviewers need this"