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for Kindred

by Maldoror

person mimi
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...... I just loovved that sex scene, you made the wait for it worthwhile. Then *starts laughing* to go from that too a problem with Chiro *grin*. I like how you shift from one sexy scene to a lighter one. I can't wait for the next part!!!!
person Lynx
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waiii! The kids are so cute- poor Lee, though. :)
person Trollmia
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, a little tiny gourd... how sweet. Gaara can be such a softie... At least in my thoughts he's a softie deep, deeeeeep, deeeeeeep down inside...
person DevilLived
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved Gaara's idea for the mini gourd.


Awesome job, once again. Love this story, it's really good. Chiro really has some problems but I think Gaara's handling him well. The kid even almost looks up to him, for some reason. Mind you, Gaara's pretty cool. :D

I can't wait till the next update! Next week you say? Well that just means I have to get through seven days of life before you update. YOSH!
person fan
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know... I absolutely loved diplomatic relations. When you first started Kindred, though, I just couldn't see myself getting into it, so I sort of ignored it for a while... and now I'm ashamed. Because I really think that the way you go in depth with the characters- especially with it being from Gaara's viewpoint now more than Lee's- is absolutely beautiful, and the perfect continuation of the original story line. I'm really enjoying this one, keep up the good work!!! And if you need any plot bunnies, email me. I've got some ideas. :)
person Ayane_Eiketsu
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!! I couldn't stop reading it if I wanted to......but I don't! XD You have written both Gaara and Lee in character better than any other author. (Which is hard to do, especially for Gaara's complex character.) The story also has no slow points that gives any time for my ADD to kick in o.o Awesome job and can't wait for the next chapter......and the one-on-one! :P
person dip
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg... that last chapter was just soooo darling. i couldn't stop laughing!!! and YES YES!!!! they soooo need some 'get together time' i can't wait >3
person Trollmia
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Needless to say - I've managed to pass a couple of hours reading through this story - again. Now I just have another our to kill...
*sighs and dreams of next chapter...* Buggering witch I am... I know... I just want you to know that actually enjoy this story just a tiny bit more than DR. But just a teeenie weeenie bit.. Well... off to hunt something new to read...
person Trollmia
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I just love the weekends so I can read a new chapter from you... *sighs happily*
When I got up this morning and saw this new chapter I skipped the coffee and jumped right onto your story. And again... wonderful. Gaara being so "nice" and carries the little boy. And the direct question "Whats wrong with your face" that got me laughing like a maniac *probably woke up the whole neighbourhood...* Anyways... May the muse of inspiration always be with you... Until next time... tadaaa
person DevilLived
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this chapter is my favourite so far. I loved the part when Gaara and Chiro went outside to the walls. It was cute when Gaara had to pick Chiro up and I laughed when all the people kept on walking into things as well.

The scene with Kankuro, Gaara and Chiro was entertaining as well, I liked how you wrote the two brothers' interaction with each other.

Can't wait till the next chapter. One-on-one time for our fav couple, huh? Woooot.