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Well I will be honest. I never could quite see Gaara and Lee together (but then I haven't seen or read the entire story), however I decided to give your story a try. I am glad I did. I like your writing style and how you portray the two young kids. work with children myself and I like how you've adapted their behavior to fit the story. Finally, you have changed my mind... I can know see Gaara and Lee as a couple and I look foward to reading the rest of your story.

You did it again... *lol* Why should I be impressed when I should know that everything you do just comes out wonderful. This has a bit of humour in it and I like that. *file it under...* And I don't think it would be a good idea to bring up that maternity instinct with Temari either. I just can see her blow a fuse and go ballistic. I don't think Gaara would want that weasel KiriKiri Mai to roam around Suna any time soon. Thumbs up and all that jazz!

i love how this story is going, and the speed at wich the chapters are coming out are a joy as well as aff being back in biz now >3 dont be discouraged by lack of reviews thou, this fic is really well written and i just adore your other fics. it would be nice if you could pull a kakashi/iruka but it looks like your more of a kaka/gai fan >3 but any who, push the writting because this as well as your other stories are never boring =3

Great chapter, I really liked it.

I liked how you write the characters in this story, you're really talented at that.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Loved how you ended this on. Update soon!

This is a worthy addition to your Gaara/Lee stories. I really appreciate seeing things from Gaara's POV, too. The end is unclear, but I'm more interested in enjoying the meanwhile, anyway. It's interesting to see the functional relationships that comprise Gaara and Lee's household, Gaara's team of advisors and aides and so on, a hidden village, et cetera.

I was a bit taken aback to realize that this takes place a few /years/ post-Diplomatic Relations. When Lee, uh... mislabeled his relationship with Gaara (to spare the children's delicate sensibilities @_@), that just seemed like something he would do in a fluster of embarassment about any aspect of his _still_rather_new_ private/sexual life. Lee seems very decorous about such things, but I would expect him to simply shy away from speaking of such things in public than outright lying about it. Gaara certainly hadn't appreciated being called a roommate.

Ahh, you got to love Gaara for his patience. I would probably have tied the brat up and covered his mouth the moment he started with all the questions... *lol* Wonderful chapter as always. May the muse of inspiration be with you always... and I'll be waiting for the next wonder you can produce.. :)

Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it!

Liked the scene with Gaara and Chiro- what were the point of all those questions?

Can't wait till the next chap, you've got me on the edge of my seat (even though there was no cliffhanger or anything... :S)

Update soon!

Hey there, hi there! hee hee i'm hyper. :D But, anyway. i loved the story and i cant wait for the next chapter! You're a great writer. buh-bye now!

Four times the charm or how did it go? See if I can get this review through this time. I made a review on LJ but I hope I can make one here as well. I read the chapter one more time and I can't help but smile. You don't have to have an evil racoon spirit stuck to your being to be a monster... you can just be small and make a lot of funny noises and smell bad. I really enjoy this story and I will look forward to read more. And when I found something interesting I will try and put in a few encouraging words every now and then. Thumbs up, dude and I hope that your Muse will be with you :)

Awesome job, once again. Your writing is beautiful.

I wonder what's wrong with Chiro? Why is he so.... blank? I wonder if Gaara will figure it out before Lee does.

Anyways, keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!