rate_review Reviews

Wonderful. Very sexy. And sweet.
What a great last line, too. <3

"crayons and spice, an aftertaste of ink" the must beautiful description of the smell of Iruka ever......wow..this was beautiful....amazingly beautiful

Hey JBM,

Read this on TONFA. Liked it then and like it now! I have actually recomended your stories to others. Great stuff!

lakngadg AUGH! o_o That was absolutely gorgeous and way beyong sweet and sensual. I'd write a better review, but I'm too busy feeling all fuzzy and happy from this to think!

Wow awsome job I lvoed it, it was soa awsome, I love the paring of thoses two, and horray for Kakashis's sexyness, lol anyway nice job I love your storys there really well written and have nice plots,...or is this case no plot plot ^_^ Anyway nice job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow. this story was so good. i just love your descriptions and how you manage to mold feelings and actions together so not only can you really picture whats happening, but you know how and what they're feeling too.

erm, even thou this was a pwp, it felt well... not like the adverage pwp. it gave me a one shot complete story feeling more then just plotless sex because they really kinda was a reason why what happened happened and well, it was just really great. >3 definitivly one of those 'leave you with a warm fuzzy feeling insdie' stories despite the slight angst. the candle was a real nice touch too...

i just hope you continue your iruka/kakashi stories because they're such a joy to read. =3

Absolutely loved it -- you managed to capture their personalities perfectly! Creative and well done, with excellent characterizations and wonderful descriptions... I definetly look forward to reading more of your stories as soon as I get some free time, lol. Again, absolutely wonderful -- keep up the good work!!!