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for Pulse

by Luciano

person Ikippiki
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww so hot! I'm totally a fan of yours! The way you write is just marvellous.
I also really like the way sweetness and hot sex mingles in your chapters.
Please write loads more!
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When Iruka just sat down to watch the blowjob-lesson. Well that cracked me up. But somehow I expected that from him.
I liked your story a lot.
person 757
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story~!

I love it ♥♥♥
person despairs
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was wonderfully detailed. It had me hooked from start to finish.
It has just the right combination of humor and sexiness.
I have to admit the idea of Sasuke practicing blowjobs on a carrot was a shock lol
but it was a GOOD shock to say the least. I was expecting something totally different
but i guess my mind was in the gutter after all those perfect lemons i had read.

You have done a great job on this fic and i hope you continue to write even more in the future.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like Carrots and Pears. *snickers* Now I'll never look at them the same way. This story was so smexy I loved it!
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this!!

The last chapter reminded me of some good times.

Nothing good ever comes from sticking girls, a box of wine and pizza in a hostel room. Educational, very.
person Jonata-kun
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story! It really freaked me out when you added the star wars line. I just had finished watching the last two movies and the 4th one in school! I pretty much jumped up from my chair and pointed at the screen. Great job, I hope to read more by you soon.
person innerchild
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a really cute fic. not to mention, sexy. and i can't believe that sasuke went to kakashi for lessons on blowjobs! that was great. especially when iruka came in and helped out. lol, that was great.

i was at my mom's house when i read this. i straight up hate being with my mom, so this kept me in a some what good mood while i was around her. thanks! anyway, i'll be looking at your other works, cause this kicked ass.

-inc
person Ryo Toya
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful, wonderful fic! I love the whole thing, and the humor is to die for. Great job, and good luck with your new works!
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi and the cocktail weenies...moo lover, very moo...Kakashi lost his mind somewhere and he thinks its frolicking in the chips. These were the funniest parts and I laughed my ass off as I read them. You do humor so very well.

I also vote for you writing a Neji and Gaara fic. I would LOVE to see that. I never thought of them as a good couple before, but you piqued my interest with the pool scene. I can't wait for your other fic though (yay for Genma/Hayate).

Thank you so very much for writing this little fun fic. I had almost not realized that you'd updated (and duh to me since your fic was two above mine on the latest updates...neurally blind as a bat, I am). *Lemon Drops Loves you and your fic* Keep writing! I can't wait to see what you come up with next.