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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome story, great job I loved every word of it.
I ADORED how you wrote Kakashi in this fic (and especially this chapter) he is hilarious and just so... Kakashi.
My fav line:
'Must be because I ate the equivalent of a blue whale stuffed with cocktail weenies. Mmmm cocktail weenies, there they are staring at me mockingly from the center of the table.'
LOL
Anyways, keep it up!
I ADORED how you wrote Kakashi in this fic (and especially this chapter) he is hilarious and just so... Kakashi.
My fav line:
'Must be because I ate the equivalent of a blue whale stuffed with cocktail weenies. Mmmm cocktail weenies, there they are staring at me mockingly from the center of the table.'
LOL
Anyways, keep it up!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story hehe Uke!Sasuke makes me happy XD
though i also love when they take turns... ah but still I love Sasuke as the bottom one =P
Anyway, It was a great story. I'm happy that Neji end up with his crush and Kakashi really make me laugh heh
he is such a pervert. You have to love him :)
though i also love when they take turns... ah but still I love Sasuke as the bottom one =P
Anyway, It was a great story. I'm happy that Neji end up with his crush and Kakashi really make me laugh heh
he is such a pervert. You have to love him :)
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! It was years ago that I read this and it's great you finished. Loved the SasuNaru at the end there. I'm a bigger fan of uke Naruto than seme Naruto so that was awesome!
Ne, I'm wonderin' if you could write a NejiGaara companion fic, you know, one about their night after the party^.^
Ne, I'm wonderin' if you could write a NejiGaara companion fic, you know, one about their night after the party^.^
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was great.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~Very nice~!...I absolutely love your story! The writing style was flawless in its execution...the transitions were perfectly spaced and the switch of POVs really flowed well! Everything was perfect!...It had a perfect balance of humor and angst!...I especially loved Kakashi's POV! You had his voice down; in fact, all the characters were IC (I totally laughed at Gai and Rock...they're precious!)...but seriously, really great story! I loved your subtlety and awesome 'Wow!' factor (those love scenes were ~HOT~!)...awesome job and can't wait to chack out your others! ^-^
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was great. Definitely worth the wait.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww please update! though i don't really want to see naruto on the bottom, there's way too much sasunaru in comparison to narusasu..
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Sasuke makes a very hot uke in your fic. I can't wait for the next part!
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww i can hardly believe it, next chapter to my fav story! i'm so happy! :)
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time that I have come across this fic and I'm so happy that I did...soooooo good.
I laughed my ass off in chapter 2 where you referred to Naruto's extreme paleness being Sasuke on a 'tan' day. Seriously hilarious. I think that you could hear my jaw aubibly "thunk" on my desk when I read the part about Kakashi teaching Sasuke how to give blowjobs, right before I burst into uncontrollable laughter.
"...getting fucked silly, stupid, and blind by a beautiful blonde..." This is an absolutely fabulous line. I love it so much.
And English isn't your native language?!? Wow, I think that puts many of us who have it as our primary language to shame. It doesn't show in your work at all. I just want to say that I think that this fic is just too much fun for me to handle, it is one of my recent favs and I can't wait for the ending chapter (though I'm a bit sad by that...I hope that you write more fics soon after this one ends).
Thank you for writing, it is very appreciated.
I laughed my ass off in chapter 2 where you referred to Naruto's extreme paleness being Sasuke on a 'tan' day. Seriously hilarious. I think that you could hear my jaw aubibly "thunk" on my desk when I read the part about Kakashi teaching Sasuke how to give blowjobs, right before I burst into uncontrollable laughter.
"...getting fucked silly, stupid, and blind by a beautiful blonde..." This is an absolutely fabulous line. I love it so much.
And English isn't your native language?!? Wow, I think that puts many of us who have it as our primary language to shame. It doesn't show in your work at all. I just want to say that I think that this fic is just too much fun for me to handle, it is one of my recent favs and I can't wait for the ending chapter (though I'm a bit sad by that...I hope that you write more fics soon after this one ends).
Thank you for writing, it is very appreciated.