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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You finally updated but it looks like it's not really your fault so that's okay. Life comes first before fanfiction writing, sadly.
Great chapte and update soon!
Great chapte and update soon!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is and hot and wonderful so far! I think you've done a great job, especially with the grammar and spelling.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my fav stories :) it's incredible, really! thank you for writing this fanfic :*
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May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I NEED to see that end of that... kakashi teaching sasuke how to give blowjobs.. OMG.???
love the story btw.. theres not a lot of those around, verry original (I thinka t least ^^')
love the story btw.. theres not a lot of those around, verry original (I thinka t least ^^')
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the fic was great! yay for narusasu ;)
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May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! That was good.. so good that my keyboad is covered in blood because of my intense nosebleed and I'm already late from a meeting because I couldn't stop reading...
Go me!
But seriously, you rock! I'll be waiting for that 7th chapter! ^________^
Go me!
But seriously, you rock! I'll be waiting for that 7th chapter! ^________^
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your fan fiction for a while now, and I must say, this is one of the most intriguing stories I have ever read. Personally, this is actually my favorite non-AU SasuNaru fic I have ever read. And I have read alot. I give you props for such a great story. At first, the order almost confused me on the character POV changes and time skips, but eventually, I got the hang of it once I got more into the story.
Great job.
Great job.
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful. undenyably sexy. I loved the last little blurb. =)
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! They finally find out who each other is... well, Naruto at least. Sasuke already knew. Anyway, I second that. Stupid laptop! All annoyances aside, where did you get such talent? I want some. Anyway, as always, please update soon! Looking forward to more!
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April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had to stop at cha 3 and tell you that this is one tightly written,very intense scene.Just really smoothly done, from the dancing onward(I lurve Queen,they are one of my personal Cannon,R.I.P.Freddie sama),their reactions during the day are spot on too.Poor Iruka,I'd kill if anyone did that to me,which means of course I have done it to some one, but I digress.I am impressed and very happy to have had the chance to read this.Now,gotta read!