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NIN did a cover of get Down,Make Love?I guess those boys where years before their time or am I showing my age and no one knows Queen's version?Gulps.Can of worms,well It might feel good?!You gotta,if you can bare Uchihacest... you just gotta 'cause I think you are just that good.And I know my shit!Ummm,that didn't come out,I mean that didn't sound quite right,did it?You gotta,gotta,gotta ,gotta.Think about it.Ficcage please.And WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON WITH THIS SITE.Where is Marrage?Where is everything...I lost my Uchiha files,nearly,well over 100 fics,damn it!F'n worm got in.Excuse my english,please.

I personally love Sasuke as a brazen wanton.Yup. Hardly anyone does him like that ,well for more than a few pasages or it goes on forever and ends with a kiss at chap27.Gag me with let down.I remain,faithfully yours,
in readership,
blisblop


Go Sasuke.Oh damn that was short,I mean it was wasn't it?No complaints mind you.

I almost forgot to review your story. wow, amazing. I don't know how you do it. Your smut/love making scenes are so well written. It makes me shivery just from reading it. Does it come naturally to you? I've never tried, but I'm just going to assume that I won't be able to write out any kinky scenes like the one's you've been portraying. The way you had Sasuke torture Naruto was priceless. Especially since you had them reveal their identities. It had me laughing for a while. And as for the last part, where Naruto was asking Sasuke how he learned to give head? The answer was hilarious. I can't wait to read your next and final chapter. Good luck with it.



~Redwitch05 ^.~

YESSSSS!!!!!!! An update!! Not just any update, but the most awesome one!

I very much loved this chapter. So hot! So sweet! And to a sick girl who's on her period, this is right up there with chocolate and bed. Makes me happy. ^^

I'm looking forward to the last chapter and the Neji Trilogy! Is the trilogy going to be related to this story at all? Cuz I would hate to see Sasuke and Naruto break up so Naruto and Neji are together... But you're the author, and I love your writing style so I'll prolly read it anyway. ^^

Thanks for making my day better! Keep up the great work!

Rah! You updated! Awesome chapter, it was really well written. Don't worry about not updating right away, most people (i.e. Me) barely update once a month!

I liked how you wrote the part with the masks, when they took them off. It was cool when Sasuke sang the verse from that song he did in the last chapter.

Who does Neji like? I can't wait to find out!! Update soon!

Yay! You have a new fan! It's kinda funny how Sasuke connects the dots... then kisses Naruto, who loves it. Please update soon!

I seriously did not think I was going to be coming here after all that crap that this site's been through. But my friend posted up her first fanfiction last night and told me to read your story. WOW ^^ Me luvey. That's saying a lot. Considering that I don't even read much. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Naruto isn't that dense and knows that Sasuke is Aki

*K*

This story is so awesome! I want to know what happens, so update soon!

Wow! You have to update! Must read more!

this story is so awesome. keep up the good work