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Whoa, great plot here! Pretty please update soon, cause I wanna know what happens next!

I love the tension between Naruto and the Konoha villagers. Still can't believe that in spite of all that work, they are still resentful. Hope, Tsunade, Sasuke or someone goes knocks some sense into those jerks and make them realise what a bunch of disgusting and petty little ingrates they are. They say how much they revere the Hokage and all he asks was to treat Naruto with respect. Hypocrites, with that kind of attitude their precious village ought to be destroyed. Note I rarely review stories much less rant about an issue in the story itself, because the majority of the time I get bored in the first page, so when I do find one you know it's gonna be good. Please do update soon.

I like it so far. I hope you update eventually.

is he going to make it to the party or isn't he??? only one hour left to go!!!! gah!!!


i hope you will update this story soon, ne?

by all means, write more. i wanna know where this is going. you're off to a great start, so keep on writing? (i want a new chapter soon!)

I love this! Very nice beginning to a great story, I'm sure. I think you are portraying the relationship Team 7 could have with eachother in a very realistic way. And also Naruto's sorrow, and the pain he feels. Anyway, please update as soon as possible, 'cause this story has great potential!(Plz excuse my English, it's not my first language).

even though ive only read 1 chapter so far (don't hold that against me im about to continue reading.)i just wanted to point out sasuke is talking way more then he really would. u said sakuras 1 of the only ones he discussed feeling with ya but like at the ending of chapter 1 when he said how he's probly get naruto to go by saying sakura needed help cookin ramen ushally right then sasuke would of probly just nodded and said his famous "hn"(i think thats it right?!) n-ehow that my point of view don't h8 me 4it k im gana go finishg reading your story c ya

o by the way just 2 point it out in ur chapter 3 when naruto falls asleep thinking about the anbu exams u said he falls into unconsioncess(ya i know i didn't spell it rite but u know wat i mean!!!!) but i believe sleeping is different from that isn't it even though thier alike i swear thier not.... o well like it so far keep it up!!!

I love it! I can't wait for you to post more but when Sasuke was on the roof with Naru-chan my mind kept screaming 'KISS HIM! PLEASE!' but he didn't T_T

Hey! I really like this fic! Can you email me when you update? My email is sakura underscore laurel 6 6 6 at yahoo dot com. Thanks!