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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this is going so far, good luck with the next chapter
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April 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! love it! love it! Its so good please update very soon!!!!
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April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it feels like my birthday. I'm finding so many good things on one day: I've found several good Naruto stories, my favorite stories got update, my classes ended, and I have a free summer. I like your beginning, it's very intriguing. I noticed the grammar problems you talk about, but thankfully they don't overwhelm the story. But you've said you haven't found anyone to check it for you yet, so I'm assuming that that will happen at some point so I'm not going to tell you to do that. I can't wait until your next update and seeing what happens with Naruto and the party. And also this Major Action you talk about. You have me excited so you better update soon.
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April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O This is just too cruel !!!! what gonna happen, what?! Update like the speed of light i tell you! NO faster! MACH 5 speed!
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April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
w00t! 3 chaps in one day! I'm really liking the plot so far. Looking forward to the action! (ahem, both shiobi action and bedroom *wink*). Very well written so far. Has a great deal of potential. I'm trying to figure out who the bad guys are! Are they OC's? Anyway, I'm enjoying your piece and will continue to look out for updates!
Oh, and I love the character development you've made for Sasuke and Naruto. The twin dragons, great parallelism there. Very very sweet gift to give Naruto. And I love the birthday note! ^-^ Please continue!
Have a good weekend!
Oh, and I love the character development you've made for Sasuke and Naruto. The twin dragons, great parallelism there. Very very sweet gift to give Naruto. And I love the birthday note! ^-^ Please continue!
Have a good weekend!