rate_review Reviews

Ok, pretty much, I loved the last chapter. It was so erotic and actually contains one of my secret fantasies (being drawn naked like that! Not to mention bondage is kinda hot too). I haven't read the manga yet and don't know much about Sai's character but I really want to find out now so I can include him in my own perverted stories. Your work is inspiratonal and sexy to the max. I love Sakura throwing a fit like that. it doesn't surprise me that she would resort to childish hyterics in such a situation. Keep writing because I can't wait to read more of your stories!

...It's over... *gasp* NOOOOO!!! oh why have you ended my fun? Ok well it was a damn good ending, I'm just a Sai Saku whore and this story just helped fill the ache. Geez did I love the painting... Ok totally off subject but I think my internet connection and my computer are coniving together to give me a seziure, there's this ad thing on here thats flashing in bright colors repeatedly like right in my line of sight and really freaking me out... not that you really care but damn it's hard to type... Um oh yeah painting... wow I loved it's decription, the colors were awesome, the emotions it seemed to invoke were stunning and I loved that it was over a scene he had imagained with Sakura in his mind.

Ok well there was one thing I really loved, Sakura's statement over Sai's absense of emotions being that he understood them too well, I love that point of view! I am writing a small fic with Sai and I love to see the different way's he's interperted and use them... and well that one won't really work, but damn if I'm not tempted... I had never thought of it like that. That idea floored me.

I really liked this chapter it was so well put together so props to you and... Nachet? was it? opps I can't remember sorry but you did a good job! The only thing I saw that made me go huh? was when it said that Sakura left a note for her mother to get the door fixed... I had gotten the impression that she didn't live with her mother, that she had moved out on her own... am I wrong? I really could be but that's the impression I had gotten.

I loved all the Sai and Sakura moments in this chapter, they all seemed realistic and they flowed well. The two seemed like a more cohesive unit -damn I've been studying too much for chem T-T - Really good job on that... Ok well this is a really long review, but I really get sad when a story I love ends, I don't want to let them go... But I guess I shall, so as always thank you so much for writing this wonderful peice of prose and I wish you luck in your contest, I hope you win, this story is so kick-ass.

Love-Jenn.

i just adore this story!! i'm not sure why i love the aloof assholes but i just do. as i have mentioned before, i wanna see what happens when sasuke finds out about their relationship.... i love the drama!! keep up the awesome work! looking forward to the next chapter.

I really like this one, as weird as it is, though one thing i have a problem with is that you're mixing up real world stuff like Evanescence into the story and it's a bit irritating. otherwise it's one of the best stories I've found in the Naruto section.

this is one of my favorite stories here and i can't believe this is the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
but anyways, i totally love this story and i'm hoping that you're other stories are as good as this one(that is if you have any other stories).
that's too many times i've said the word stories, is'nt it huh?

WOOHOO!! Brilliant ending! How sad for it to end, but all good things must, ne?

GOOD LUCK WITH THE NFA'S!

from beginning to end, this story has gotten me hot n' bothered!!!

I am so dying for another chapter!! I cannot wait, this is honestly of on the best ff's I have ever read. E-mail me at hplotrnerd@yahoo.com as soon as you update!!

It was starting to build up nicely. Really good. And then, Evanescenes and sex toys poped up, one after the other. A true "wtf??!!" moment. I mean, you had it going nicely there, loving the "I'm running my hands all over your skin but I'm not lusting for you" theme you had going, and it kinda got... Ruined.... >.< And really, I don't know why but the thought of Evanescenes in the middle ruined it all for me... Well not all. Things picked up in the middle when Sai begin drilling her!

Anyway, good job on the fic. Just try to watch what you pop into the scene, for crazed fanatics like me. x3

WWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa I want the new chapter!!!!! NOWWWW!!!!!!!