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for Ink Me

by KrickItat

person kyubi_teaser
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww...I was hoping there was a new chapter! *sulks* there is going to be another chapter.... right? maybe another deliciously smutty one when they wake up in the morning? They wake up, scream and yell at each for what they did together... then pounce each other again *lol*

here's hoping you can squeeze one more out

~Teaser
person sileath
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shyly pokes* ummm errr...I have a fanart because I like your story. It's at http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v253/sileath/sakuradragon.jpg ^////^ I'm sorry if it's not terribly good or if I couldn't draw the dragon the proper way. *Slinks off to hide*

person blacksailsof1989
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic. are u going to elaborate on the power of the tattoo? that might put some energy back into it. i did love the latest chapter though. and u were right about the smoking scene. HOT. i love how u dont go overboard on detail with the smaller parts but when u get to the important stuff it gushes with excellent physical, sensual, and emotional detail.
person jennjennr
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha where the hell have I been for the last week...? Oh yeah trying to stop water from flooding my house... anyway wow... great chapter... Hm I loved the choice of Kakashi... good pick on that. Ha oh yeah I liked the sex... gosh that Sai is one hot bastard... Love him oh yes I do. Wait, so you said that Sasuke hadn't seen the tattoo yet...? I thought he had, but if you say so... I wonder what he would think of it... a male dragon now perched on Sakura's person. I love the fact that you have made the story Sai and Sakura couple orriented... I love the two as a couple... I don't know but the dynamic between them is so fun to read. Espically since them are both slightly emotionally stuntted, his forcefulness on the bed was fun to watch...but I must admit the idea of him hiding out in her bath room for several hours is slightly disturbing... I can't wait to see her other team-mates reactions to her tattoo, and to see her reaction to letting Sai sleep with her...

Hmm I'd make you an Art... execpt that I'm no good at drawing dragons... and the only way I could get it on my computer is to use a camera... that hates me... all of the picutres come out fuzzy... but hey if you want a crappy fuzzy pink iguana looking thing, I'm your girl. Thank you so for updating, and I beg that you update again soon... gosh I think I am smut deprived... no one seems to be writing any and well I am going slightly nuts...
person tsukashi
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heya girl! I just re-read the whole thing. You know me, so I'm sure you know that I'm pretty picky. Ok, I'll give that there were some typo's here or there, but on a whole this story is awesome!

The icing on the cake would be to have Sakura rub it in Saucy's face about Sai. He made her feel like a whore, yet she was still this old and a virgin.

Ooooh, another cool thing could be, as time goes by, the dragon works as a self defence mechanism. IE if someone who Sakura doesn't want to touch her touches her, the dragon's scales are razor sharp and cut them. But when someone she is ok with touches her, they just feel textured. Somehow Sasuke finds out that her new artwork has special properties & when he tries to touch it he pulls back a bloody hand. Oooh, another idea - it could work in conjunction with Inner Sakura.

Ok it's really late & I should have gone to bed 2 hours ago. Hugs & ttys!
person Ray
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
REALLY interesting story. Your style of writing is captivating. (and the M-rated plot doesn't hurt!) I started reading it a while ago and for some reason i couldn't stop thinking about it. I usually only read stories on AFF once and than forget about them, but for some reason i couldn't stop thinking 'Ahhh i wonder what happened to the tattoo story. Did Sai and Sakura have sex? What gender is Sakura's tattoo? My god Sasuke is hot!' Your story has officially cursed me! I'm sure I'm not the first person to say this but Damn, now i really want a moving tattoo...
person Ox King
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a really good chapter. I'm looking forward to what becomes of Sai and Sakura's relationship. New chapter soon, thanks.
person Neko-Chan
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man..i want a tattoo like that!!! wahhhh!!! damn reality...its no fun >.<
Great chapter!! cant wait for more!!!
person Neal
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still hate the dragon almost as much as I hate Sai, but the fic is coming along great. You're making me interested in what's going to happen to characters I dislike and that's the sign of a great writer.
person katie
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm normally not the hugest fan of het, but I started reading this a while ago and wow...you definitely turned me around. I love how your writing is so sensual, even in the overtly sexual bits. It's beautiful. You are such a gifted writer. Thank you so much.