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by theyoungestuchiha

person Liah
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG *_* Well i got confused with the beginig at first but then got it eventually ^^; Cos i didn't get whether it was real or a dream...

But great chapter! *_* I hope you update soon... i wanna see how Sasuke reacts now he's realised ^^; XD

Liah xx
person DevilLived
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter, great job. Neji's dream was very well done (drool). :D

It took me a couple of seconds to realize what Kakashi was doing while Sasuke was having nightmares. Then I was like: Oh... OOohhh (insert drool). LOL

Anyways, thinking of something more intelligent to say.... I like how you're making the characters your own, you really write them well. The scenes with Kakashi and Sasuke are always interesting and I think I enjoy them the most.

Well, it's late here so I'm gonna wrap it up now. Update soon, alright?
person DevilLived
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job, I loved the chapter.

My favourite moments are the ones with Kakashi and Sasuke, I like how youw write them together. The scene with those two in this chapter while Sasuke was stuck in the hospital was very cuuute.

Liked how you ended the chapter too.


Update soon, alright?
person annalise
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WoW. I just finished reading your whole story in one sitting and it was fantastic. Your use of language and story-telling is amazing and imagery provoking. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks...
person DevilLived
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another chapter. I liked how you wrote the part with the seal, it was beautifully written. Orochimaru is a pervy pedophile, mind you, then what does that make Kakashi? .... Well, at least Kakashi isn't planning on kidnapping our popular Uchiha!


Loved the chapter and I can't wait till the next! Update soon!
person Nanaka
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story... can't wait to read more... keep them cumming