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I was kinda uncertain as to what happened betwen the three boys but I was kinda tired.Itachi is so so so hot.I hope in some strange way this works out.

holy shit, that was an INTENSE chapter.. wow... just... wow.. itachi plagued by sasuke's voice, and letting himself drown in it (what a yummy vision deidara got to see), sasuke plagued by the thought of his 'betrayal' of itachi, wanting him to save him, both of them plagued by their memories, gaara and naruto! and gaara knows itachi??!! damn i hope the next chapter doesn't take too long!!

The best fic on the sight going right now.Itachi's responce to sasule's voice was mesmerising.Yee gods,what next.The tempo the blending of time and situation.Masterly done.P lease,more soon.No pressure though.........it's wonderful,beyond my sad vocabulary to critique.

damn this story is amazing! right now.. i'm feeling a bit like itachi was in the last chapter lol, just having read what you have written so far and how much i'm GLUED TO THE SCREEN and CRAVING MORE!! oh please i hope you have more written for this soon! *begs*

So, I know it has been hard with AFF being down and what not, but when the site does work for me *sigh* I will ALWAYS check to see if its updated. This plot, or storyline and ideas you have going are so effen (good vodka ;) captivating that I will read it over and over again. I am asking you as a hardcore FAN for your loverly writing that you update and continue on with this, can only dream of what will happen next with the two raven beauties!, If you need motivation, will provide!!!!!!! So give us our DRUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. BAh

that was absolutely delicious. i like how you go back and forth between the past and present. i didn't find it confusing. anywho, i'm glad that itachi has noticed sasuke-kun again and i can't wait till the brothers meet up again. mmm i love this fic!

Your use of descriptive passages is f'n breath taking.You make me feel some what the way Sasuke made Itachi feel at the end of chap 5.I want you ta live however.Just a real,absolute real joy to read.It had a physical impact."Chest like a furnace",just so many stunning,evocative images... so fast..but smooth,effortless,constant turns and sudden apperitions ,its an almost flawless flow,I can't see a flaw myself but.. its rather dazzeling,the use of flashbacks perfectly timed.Sasukes reaction to Itachi is brilliant.Its the way I like them and write them(You are better,there is no doubt about that but its really amazing for someone else to present it this way.)I probably sound like a raving idiot.It's your fault.I am sooooo glad you are keeping this up.Makes blowing a grand in the past four,five months on my computer worth it.It made me hungry,I lost weight but I wrote alot and now that I'm back here(well I am apauled{sp} really,the site what where is all the work????) its just made all that work I did to amuse myself during my computer drought worth it.... to see that these idea's can be worked out so well.Inspirational I guess you'ld say.Oh man I'm tired but I had to say HEY,however inchoherantly.Lovely,malevolent.Orochimaru's responces....man have I tried to acheive that delerious affect, you have.... gaugh...just so well done.Drool at ya later.DO NOT STOP.PLEASE > <,

OHHHHHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD FINALLY YTOU FUCKING UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm real confused but I kinda get it buh I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT OMGEHOMGEHOMGEH I LOVE IT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG!! <3<3<3<3 I LOVE THIS FUCKING SOTRY AND YOU GODAMNIT LOL NOOOOOOOOW UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

It's very, very hard to keep Itachi and Sasuke in character in an Uchihacest fic that goes any longer than one chapter. And yet you manage it so amazingly well. It's long been my opinion that if there ever was anything between Itachi and Sasuke, it would be so incredibly fucked up that it would barely be recognizable as anything more than hate and lust, and you've just captured that (and so much more) perfectly. The last lines in your latest chapter? Perfect. The entire scene with Itachi hearing Sasuke's song had me practically staring at the screen with my mouth hanging open.

I will admit that I do occasionally go all fangirly over the fics that put Itachi and Sasuke together in the end, with no angst and all the happy happy love one could imagine, OOC-ness be damned. However, as far as keeping everyone in character, and capturing every facet of Itachi and Sasuke's personalities, this is by far my very favorite Uchihacest fic. And it's not just Itachi and Sasuke, you've got Orochimaru just right, and even the brief conversation with Kiba left your readers feeling that the real Kiba had just strolled across their computer screens. I honestly don't know how to give this fic the praise that it deserves, so I'll just beg you for a new chapter, hopefully soon.