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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweet smuttiness! When I started reading, I would've never expected 'To burn' to turn out as a foursome. Usually I don't read threesomes and such but now I just couldn't take my eyes of your story! ^__^ It's such a well written piece of smut, mmm, adorable.
Maybe that part with simultaneous taking of Sakura's and Ino's virginity was too unreal (I just can't imagine foreign guys going in sync like this) but it really doesn't matter that much.
Thank you for sharing with us, humble readers!
Maybe that part with simultaneous taking of Sakura's and Ino's virginity was too unreal (I just can't imagine foreign guys going in sync like this) but it really doesn't matter that much.
Thank you for sharing with us, humble readers!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, this is the ultimate ItaSaku club fantasy. Is Itachi Akatsuki her, bcoz it's unclear?
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, god xD
that was reaally good xD
update soon :D
that was reaally good xD
update soon :D
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one word. HOT!!!
At first i was kind of excited that Kakashi was going to be there, but i guess it worked out better this way, he probably just missed the fuck of his life.
I wonder if Itachi will ever let Sakura go after that 'little' incounter.
Great fic, hope cha update soon. :)
At first i was kind of excited that Kakashi was going to be there, but i guess it worked out better this way, he probably just missed the fuck of his life.
I wonder if Itachi will ever let Sakura go after that 'little' incounter.
Great fic, hope cha update soon. :)
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
r u finished with this story? please don't say yes i would love to see the rest of team 7's faces when itachi teases sakura about stealing her underwear! please continue the story!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU SHOULD DO A PART 2 FOR THIS STORY OR ADD ON I LIKE THIS STORY ALOT.**
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I neeeeed more. That was tre amazing.
Jelloshots seem fun x]
Jelloshots seem fun x]
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In response to the last reviewer who judisciously decided to remain anonymous:
*shrugs* So? I'd say its a damn sight better then anything you've written
If you dont feel that way then prove it
*shrugs* So? I'd say its a damn sight better then anything you've written
If you dont feel that way then prove it
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a giant pile of crap. Way to transcribe your own drunken nightclub experience into a Naruto fanfic, because this is just plain stupid. I really like the part where they go take a piss together, you deserve a prize.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your writing, everything i have read of yours is excellent. The description is great and you don't go to slow or to fast keep up the Awsome Work