rate_review Reviews

This story is very well written! I applaud you. The plot, and portrayal of the characters are very accurate(that is, if you were basing the characters on the anime). The vocabulary and grammar are also very well done. The only complaint I have is that Naruto seems so weak. Of course, he's no match for some of the stronger boys, but his physical strength is stronger than portrayed in this story.

Please update soon!

Oh my god! That was such a good chapter! I mean, yeah sure..It sucks that Sasuke is so down and his nightmares are bothering him.. But I'm all into that angsty suspenful shat. XD lol. ARgh..What were Neji and Kiba thinkin! Sasuke needs to open a can of whoop ass on someone..!

Update soon!! -puppy eyes-

YOU COMPLETED THE STORY ON FF.NET BUT YOU DIDN'T UPDATE ON ADULTFANFICTION >.<

omg please write like the wind for the next one!

Usually, I like to review at least one before I read the latest chapter of a story with more than five chaps, but in this case, your story was too good and I just barely got to read it this week. (8 chaps, its seriously taken me a week to finish them all lol) So this is great! Oh I just loved the "So you really don't like girls" GASP lol that was hilarious!!!! I hope you update soon, that last part left us hanging, which i should mention, damn do I feel bad for Naruto. I mean how many times now since he me Sasuke (has this only been one week? Or two yeah?) almost gotten raped? Poor thing (okay so only two, but still, who almost gets raped once in a year?!) Yeah, so Poor Naruto (I love him very much, Sasuke comes second cuz he's naruto's lover.) uPdAtE sOoN!!!!

Naru + Sasu forever!!!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! WHEN CAN U UPDATE? I WANT TO KNOW MORE!!! WHAT HAPPEN NEXT! I WANT TO KNOW! I LOVE THE STORY SO MUCH! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THE STORY! I LIKE HOW U HAVE NARUTO CLUELESS TO THE WHAT HAPPENING, IT SO FUN READING ABOUT IT! THANK YOU!!!

YEA! *sobs* You updated, I'm so happy. This chap kicked ass. Poor Naruto. He so molestible. Go Sasuke! Protect your man. Oh you also get the award for one of the most creepiest and sickest Itachi's. I'm never gonna drink cocoa again. Good luck.

please update soon!!!

This is my first time reviewing you since I just read this story yesterday ^^ But WOW!!! Please keep going! I can't wait to see how it would turn out to be. *drags Temari away from Naruto* Gomen, I had to do that...XD. Please update soon, this is one super-duper story!!!


~Wind

omg. Beat the shit out of them, Sasuke. I swear to God I was shaking. I thought that he was going to get raped. I didn't know where the hell Sasuke was. I thought maybe he'd come home after they had their demented "fun." Poor Naruto. My poor baby being neglected by Uchiha and forced to deal with a bunch of asses.

Dude, I swear I was about to email you with threats if you didn't update this story. Nah, you know I'm playing ^^ *huggles* But I WAS going crazy b/c it was taking a bit long. Can't help it. I love this story so much. It's one of my fave. Your angst is amazing. What the hell was Itachi trying to give his brother to drink? blood?! ....gross.

I would make this longer, but my dad will kill me if he woke up and found me this late on the computer. Though it's only 1:15 ....this is considered very late for my father. So I'll try and meet you at your next chapter. I haven't really been on the computer much this passed week due to school and siblings, but that will never keep me from checking on your awesome story/stories.


Much Love and kudos,

~Ria ^-^

P.S. I hope that Sasuke and Naruto go to the dance together as dates ^^