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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the entire story thus far.
The sudden plot twist on Naruto's part sure made the fic more entertaining.
I can't wait to see what will happen next..and will Naruto ever get past his state of denial? =]
The sudden plot twist on Naruto's part sure made the fic more entertaining.
I can't wait to see what will happen next..and will Naruto ever get past his state of denial? =]
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! I really really love this!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. Hard to find original work in fan fiction. I love the tone and everything flows smoothly. I laughed soooo hard at the locker cleaning scenario! Keep up the good work!
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T___T -waits for update
its too addictive Dx
its too addictive Dx
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update. Soon. I cannot empahsize that enough. SOON. I absolutely need to know how Naruto's cluelesness and Sasuke's possesiveness clash.
Muchas grasias,
Dust Bunny
Muchas grasias,
Dust Bunny
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!OMG i love this story. but i wish u upated more often on ff.net. your on my favorites list. wow this fic was wild funny and surpised me in ways i didnt think possible. AND SASUKE! HE'S JEALOUS! bt his character and naruto's are more like the way they act in the series. except for gym. lol. this is the longest review i have ever written on my 'on screen keyboard' ja-ne n keep it up. update SOON!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
n_n This is just awesome. You have a talent for writing that I simply can't help but envy.
I love it. All of it.
But, I can't help but be suspicious of Temari. o_o
It seems odd that she's all lovey-dovey towards Naruto when her brother seems to despise him.
Oh wait, are Temari and Gaara not brother and sister in this fic? xD
Oops. I can't tell.
Anyway, love it all. -Holds up a card with 10 on it.-
<3
I love it. All of it.
But, I can't help but be suspicious of Temari. o_o
It seems odd that she's all lovey-dovey towards Naruto when her brother seems to despise him.
Oh wait, are Temari and Gaara not brother and sister in this fic? xD
Oops. I can't tell.
Anyway, love it all. -Holds up a card with 10 on it.-
<3
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story!!!! Beautiful beautiful beautiful!!!!!!!!! I wish you would update soon so i can read more...I really like the way you portray the characters, (except for gaara.....but that's ok), mainly naruto and sasuke. Your writing style is great too (i can read without getting distracted by mistakes there are so many) and transitioning is smooth. The story flows so well! Plus, it doesn't feel rushed--everything is built up in stages. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Thank you so much for writing this!
Kayo
Kayo
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEYY,
ok so like USSUALLY.. when I read unfinished fanfics .. I dont get to know how it ends.. since I dont check back to see if the author has updated
and.. this is like my FIRST review// so I dont know what I am suppose to write about...
BUT OMG, I LOVE THIS FANFICTION! =O
I am just waiting for those two to make it CLEAR that they have like each other *smiles*
so yes, you definetly wrote a VERY good fanfiction <33
and I really want to know how it ends.. so is there anyway I CAN KNOW..WHEN YOU ARE UPDATEING IT NEXT?
[[cutechilly@hotmail.com]]
ok so like USSUALLY.. when I read unfinished fanfics .. I dont get to know how it ends.. since I dont check back to see if the author has updated
and.. this is like my FIRST review// so I dont know what I am suppose to write about...
BUT OMG, I LOVE THIS FANFICTION! =O
I am just waiting for those two to make it CLEAR that they have like each other *smiles*
so yes, you definetly wrote a VERY good fanfiction <33
and I really want to know how it ends.. so is there anyway I CAN KNOW..WHEN YOU ARE UPDATEING IT NEXT?
[[cutechilly@hotmail.com]]
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what to say about this? Quite frankly, I love it! You've captured the characters so well, (though I'm a Gaara fan... but even that's more accurate than usual) your spelling and grammar is great and the plot moves along so smoothly. I'mactually nervous for Naruto! Can't wait to see how this plays out!