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for Life's Little Changes

by ladywolfTerri

person ded (too lazy to log in)
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kawaiii! More i need more! -flips of Neji- I always disliked him, trying to take Naru-chan from Sasu-chan. Freaky eyed bastard! Viva La Sasunaru! -holds up 'Sasunaru 4eva' flag- XDD I can't wait for more, this is really cute, i love how you write my boys :D (Yes they belong to meeeeeee!) XD
person YaoiOtaku
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
agreed, agreed, hehe i liked Chapter 5 better too.
*squeal* it was so adorable how Naruto sauntered out in a g-string
and Sasuke bought it too!
ah.......SasuNaru love =D
person kuu-ish
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a very good story, I really like how you've done it. I love how you have both of them with their own completely different lifestyles, it really gives it...Just.. Er. I can't really explain it, though I'm sure you understand what I mean. Rofl. I love how Sasuke's "Friends" are all gawky around Naruto.. It's cute how they share food and stuff, hehe.. You can't help but go "aww..!" Teehee!

And Neji.... I love the guy, but he better back off!! -shakes fist vigorously-!!!R#@%#@ Sasuke>Neji!!

:P

I'm bookmarkin' this. A great story indeed!!! Hope you update it sooner or later!
person innerchild
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. i liked the scene with naruto and sauske trying clothes on together... and then the little lingerie thing. that was funny. hope you update soon, cause this story kicks ass.

later,
innerchild
person Amber
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to write the next chapter? I really like this story.
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I loved that. please update soon! this is by far the best story i've ever read with this pairing. ah... i don't have words to describe how much i enjoyed this, so pelase update!

-innerchild
person Your Mom\'s Face
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I feel like your involuntary stalker! I'm the Your Mom's Face that annoys you over at FF.net all the time!!

Small world, eh?

I haven't been over there for a while, though, so I have no idea if you've updated recently or anything...

Eh, I'm gonna go annoy/involuntarily stalk someone else for a while.

Toodles!!
person Your Mom\'s Face
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
P.S., holy SHIT doesn't ANYONE dislike your fic???

You've got a shitload of reviews, and it's late, so my mind won't say 'no' to any kind of entertainment, so I scrolled down to see if anyone dislikes your story, and friggin NO ONE does!! Everyone LOVES it!! How do you DO that???

Seriously!!

Meh...

I'm just destined not to have billions of adoring fans. Apparently, I'm too controversial (total bullshit, by the way).

Oh well, I'm writing a GaaraxLee fic to fill in all the empty space summer's provided in both my brain and my schedule. I know the pairing's less than appreciated, but I've got this big thing planned out in my head, where Gaara visits Lee in the hospital on accident (don't want to explain how; the summary takes a couple of paragraphs), and they set up a system where Gaara assists Lee in his recovery and retraining and Lee in return teaches Gaara about emotions and all of their complexities. It sounds cliche, I know, but if you were to read the first chapter, you may see how it works! Each chapter would be a new lesson. They'd be called stuff like, "Lesson 3: Sadness," and, "Lesson 6: Awkwardness" (I've skipped ahead to write this chapter first, cus it's gonna be my fvorite; it'll consist of a wet dream and Gaara's first lesson in feeding someone).

If you're interested, or just plain bored, e-mail me, and I'll send you a rough draft of the first chapter upon completion, and you can give me pointers, tell me what I need to back off on (I tend to use a sense of humor in my writing that nobody gets but me), what I need to bulk up, the like. I need and outside source to check for errors, and I don't know anyone in person I'm willing to entrust that to.

I actually wasn't planning on asking you this when I came to annoy you. I just thought I'd extend the offer to someone who could possibly have the same worthless existance and free time as I do to sit around and write all day. Don't feel obligated to say yes or anything, cus I could just go ask one of my other favorite authors to help me out. In fact, there's someone I'm thinking about asking whether you agree to help out as well or not (can't have too many opinions).

Whelp, now that I've officially written a P.S. equal to about 12 of the script to which it is post, I'm gonna go ask some other random authors to waste their valuable time helping a mediocher writer and an even worse speler (typo intended) write a stunning masterpiece for a fanfiction site on the internet using a pairing that most people apparently don't even like.

OOH!! And stalking involuntarily! That too!!

Toodles!!
person chibimel
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is the best fic I have read in a long time. I hope you continue with this. I've got into to many that stopped and I'm a sad little chibi now. Well good luck.
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when are u going to update