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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I saw that what I wrote didnt show up...but maybe Its just me,
alls I really said was that I was leaving more feedback so you update faster as you
said you would ^_^ heheh
*I so sneaky* ok...hahah, that was basically it
Yay for the goodness of you!
alls I really said was that I was leaving more feedback so you update faster as you
said you would ^_^ heheh
*I so sneaky* ok...hahah, that was basically it
Yay for the goodness of you!
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww!!! this is such a good story! I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. It's so inCharacter.
heehee. I wonder what Gaara was talking about, that sexy, sexy boy. :3
please update again soon!
heehee. I wonder what Gaara was talking about, that sexy, sexy boy. :3
please update again soon!
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) One could almost see the look on Sasuke's face as Naruto pulled him into the pool ans also with the dinner thing. Laughed through the whole chapter. Looking forward to see what will happen next.
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XDDDDDDDDDDDDD UWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh!!
Love it love it LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You so need to update quicker ^_^
But I guess I cant TOTALLY complain, since your chapters are
a little bigger than some >.< heheheh
HURRAY!!
Love it love it LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You so need to update quicker ^_^
But I guess I cant TOTALLY complain, since your chapters are
a little bigger than some >.< heheheh
HURRAY!!
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it, I love it ^^ you actually had him sit on Sasuke's lap. So cute. I was not expecting you to do that. So, now Sasuke knows about Naruto's parents. Poor guy T^T That's so sad. He's not worthless. Damn that foster father of his. It was really sweet how Sasuke bought him some lunch. That was so nice of him. Now, what confuses me most is what the hell Gaara and Sasuke were talking about. I couldn't tell if Gaara and Naruto were friends or what. Much less if he was jealous knowing that the Blonde has been seeing Sasuke. Anyways, excellent job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
btw, you have a few grammatical errors and are lacking a few punctuation marks in your story. Just thought to let you know. ^^
~Redwitch05
btw, you have a few grammatical errors and are lacking a few punctuation marks in your story. Just thought to let you know. ^^
~Redwitch05
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April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this. It is rich, enlighting, and something different!!! Keep writing I am looking forward to reading more.
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April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wee! I did like it alot!
Great job on it! ^_^
(I think that I already left a review, but frankly, I dont remember!! >.< hehe)
Great job on it! ^_^
(I think that I already left a review, but frankly, I dont remember!! >.< hehe)
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April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should really continue this fic! I love it! Plus, it's funny watching Naruto suffer through learning things at Sasuke's house. I really hope that you'll continue this fic, it's great so far, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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April 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man i love this! *snickers* Poor Naruto having to deal with Sasuke =P
But poor guy seriously for having to live where he does Oo Man a rough place >_>
Well i cant wait to read more ^_^
But poor guy seriously for having to live where he does Oo Man a rough place >_>
Well i cant wait to read more ^_^
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April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More than enjoyed ^^ I LOOOOVE it. I really can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so excited. thank you for making this long to. It's a nice change. The whole thing with Sasuke being a tutor is very entertaining. I wonder how he'll take it when he finds out that Naruto doesn't have a family...? For a sec, I seriously thought you were going to have Naruto walk rather than be driven to Sasuke's house. Of course, you're not planning on doing that......not anytime soon anyway. oh, please do mention Neji somewhere in the next chapter. I figured that he should be mentioned b/c of the way you had Sasuke react to him tutoring Naruto. your choice. btw, are Neji and Naruto friends? Gotta go, brother is cranky and wants to go to sleep. ^.^
Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more from you
~Redwitch05 ^.~
Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more from you
~Redwitch05 ^.~