rate_review Reviews

Great story so far!) Looking forward to reading more of it.

HOLY CRAP!!
I really liked this fic! It makes me excited about whats to come!
You did a very good job ^_^
Hope you update soon!! Keep up the good work too!


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YES! I was looking for a good NaruSasu fic today and looks like i've found one - only it's so new that there's only one chapter. I literally growled when I saw that, lol. The pacing of this story so far is wonderful, and everyone is in character, which is a relief considering it's an AU fic. You haven't rushed into anything as far as their relationship goes, which is another relief. I've only read one chapter so far, but i'm already dying for another one. This story looks like it's definetly going to by one of my favorites! Really good job so far, and i'm looking forward to the next update.

omg omg omg omg omg i love love loved it!! the writing was good and the flow was practically perfect...i like the way u styled ur characters to be IC n i reli hope more comes along...

Ok, so, my first thought was 'uh, another High-school-fic', but then I clicked it and saw the lenght of the chapter; and give it a try (because I really don't like short chaptered storys, therefore everything else is automatically on my good side ^^)
I really like it, it's well written and a nice read. The interaction and the dialogues make the characters alive and I'm eager to know what is going to happen and what they are going to do.

This story is realistically AU. It's like you knew just how to fit the boys personalities into a different setting and still keep them as they always are. A Naruto is his usual, out-going, obstinant self, while Sasuke acts as if the world could bow down to him and he would just step on it. I also like the concept. It's been done, but the way you write it is very real and contemporary. I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Your story is so awesome. I was disappointed though. T_T no pool scene!!!

Can't wait to read more! ^_^