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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SCREEEECH* Nooo!! Not another interruption TT_TT!!!
Kuku, awwwwesome chapter XD. God what is it with everyone and being slack to Naruto. Sasuke's personality is super duper awesome, as expected from such an astounding author such as yourself XP.
Update soon! *throws flowers*
Kuku, awwwwesome chapter XD. God what is it with everyone and being slack to Naruto. Sasuke's personality is super duper awesome, as expected from such an astounding author such as yourself XP.
Update soon! *throws flowers*
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! usually the characters in sas/naru stories are unlike the usual personalit in the manga and anime I love how they turned out please update! it was really getting good!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i like this! i am so excited to see what will be next. i hope you update soon!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hate lee
:'(
well not really but right now i do...
:'(
well not really but right now i do...
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im lovin this fiction, and by the way hello lee since you have now appearedin this fiction. Update when you can thanks _demonrights
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE Lee! hahaha "G- BOY!!" AAAAAhahahahhaa! Keep writing! I want more chapters! *jumps up and down flailing hands like a school girl*
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL I just feel terrible for Sasuke, he might really die a virgin the way this is going. That was a very mean cliffy thing! OMG Sasuke was so adorable in this chapter and poor Naruto is so dense he doesn't realize the other people don't really want his company. Though I can see the excitement of going to the fair overriding that. Well that and he doesn't think he's done/doing anything wrong. Hmm... all well, so close for poor Sasuke. I hope he beats the crap out of Lee. *cries* it was just getting hot.:p
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that's Sai-- he's so socially awkward/ignorant; I think him & an openly gay, yet self-conscious Naruto would by hys-terical. You've managed to produce a cute, well written story while still keeping the serious edge that colors the manga... very impressive. I actually forgot I was reading-- that is to say, I wasn't conscious of your prose, they flowed so naturally. There were a few, minor gramatical mistakes here and there, but overall I'd say it's top notch. I can't wait for the next chapter! I love it!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is fantastic. I've never laughed so much while reading fanfiction. This is great stuff.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You would think that Sasuke would make sure that all entries to the house would be locked before trying to get into Naruto's pants,er...swimsuit. Yup! They're gonna die virgins! Glad to see the story updated.