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hihi.. wonderful. A drunk Itachi.. whoho. so funny and sexy.. ^__^

I just stumbled across this one. I loved it!

WOW...that was just.. HOT!!!!!
I love Itachi/Naruto! ^^

Aah that was good too. I took quotes and put them on my DA message thing, I hope that's okay. I credited them to you. I should put a link though, so people will then click on it and read it. I like ItaNaru (NaruIta, whatever). And I think Itachi can be so humorous sometimes. I can't even remember how many times I laughed. But it's those random comments out of nowhere that I just loved. Especially at the end when Neji had that paingint and Naru's like "Oh," then, "It's good." LOL I wish you had more on here.

Hahaha, lovin' it. Hmm, I am a bit late reading this! Such a bother. Okay, one important thing to say then: I'm corrupted.

TnT

That's right!! Down with the weepy-uke Naruto! We ARE talking about the future Hokage here!
I really enjoyed your story. You're Naruto sounds exactly like I would imagine an older Naruto.
This is one of the stories I have bookmarked so that I can return anytime I need some hot Naruto action. I really like the idea of him "stickin' it" to Itachi. I must say I was quite excited when I brought it up today and found there was a Part II. It was excellent, and I thought you did a geat job of describing these boys as drunk. In fact, some of it brought back memories (refrigeration units in space and homegrown music projects, that is) Now, I guess it was only fair to give Itachi his turn but I would love more Naruto seme action. So, the next time you feel like doing a little PWP, I hope you decide to come back and have a few more drinks with the Barflies!
Also, if you ever need help getting through your stories, feel free to get in contact with me. I love working with authors. (I would make a great editor if I ever decide to stay in one place long enough)
CHEERS!

I love it!!!!!
I wasn't really sure what to think when I read the pairing but I thought "what the hell!!!! Maybe it will be interesting!!"
And it was!!! I thought the drunken conversations were the best!!!!
I busted out laughing when Itachi wrote the little note for Sasuke, telling him he was out of the Uchiha Clan because of bad fashon taste!!!!!
The sex was great!!! Are you going to continue with this story or are you going on to another story???? I would gladly read your other stories!!!
Great job!!!!

yes, u have done well on the corruption. the first one you wrote was my first time reading an itachi and naruto fic, and i loved it. and i really liked this one as well.

favorite line. "let's go have man sex."

that's naruto for ya.

-innerchild

Thank you sooooo much!!!!!!!!!!
I just love the idea of NaruIta ( and NaruSasu, and NaruItaxSasu-not-uchihacest is the ultimate turn on, heh :) and your fic is an absolute masterpiece, it's funny, it's witty and it's smexy!! Your Itachi is really cool, I love the idea that he's not a total freak but a real human being with needs, not only phisical ones. I think he's falling for Naruto, and hard, seeking his company like that.
And inserting Neji into the picture makes it even better, I can definately picture him snickerring at Naruto while in a bar, torturing our gorgious blond :)
I really, reeeeealy hope you'll write another chapter. And then maybe another... :)))

Cool! Meow's a fan of "barfly"!!! NaruIta is SO HOT!!! Meow wishes Itachi could find a way to make their meetings regular!! He's genius after all.
Also meow wishes there was a part with sasuke reciving Itachi's letter!