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by Letta

person Meow
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Meow's a fan of "barfly"!!! NaruIta is SO HOT!!! Meow wishes Itachi could find a way to make their meetings regular!! He's genius after all.
Also meow wishes there was a part with sasuke reciving Itachi's letter!
person kaesaku
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
winner line: Despite their dying curiosity, no one dared asked questions, since their dying curiosity would probably cause them to die.

hmm~ where do i start?
well first, i love the pairing..
hard to look for decent NaruIta fics, esp. since most people prefer the younger uchiha.. (although, i love that, too! ^^)
yeah, and i so LOVE naru-seme!
..loves him to bits and pieces!
^^

..loves your writing style~
not too emotional, hot & sexy, with sarcastic humor in-between..
i like how their drunken minds think..
^^


person kaesaku
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..loves this. -> “Sasuke is officially kicked out of the Uchiha clan.” Never mind the clan only consisted of two people. It was like kids with a clubhouse."
hilarious.

as always, it's hot~
but, is that really the..last chapter?
..or are you going to add another one?
hmmm~

neji's such a cool guy~
..loves him.
..loves NaruIta more.
..loves ur fic.
^^
person Darling_425
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Squeee* This is SOOOOOOOOOO cool! I love this story! You're very good! *thumbs up* Neji is a cool drunker *smirk*
I hope you'll write something soon enough.
person Hestia
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I think your previous reviewers pointed out the truly great lines and moments--the letter to Sasuke and the two discussing his clothes, my favorites.
Anyway, I just wanted to say that you pulled this impossible pairing off very well!
person LadyD
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what about Sasuke's reaction to the letter? =O


'sides that, i relly liked your story :]
person Cindy
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How do you do it? I laugh so hard reading this story. The characters are so off the wall but still in character somehow. Maybe exaggeration, aye? Love it! Haven't found anythign else quite like this.

"That's it - Sasuke's out of the Clan."
"Maybe you should write him a letter."

That and the conversation about Sasukre needing psycopath lessons are my favorites.

And smexy stuff too? What more could a girl want?

Thanks!

schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aahhh this was sooo great! i loved both parts!! the raw and frantic, yet still somehow controlled chemistry and desire (and passion!) between the two that you described was just soooo hot! and i love the description of the added effects the alcohol had.. drunk itachi is so funny to me.. as are both their thoughts on how wrong the situation was and what the consequences might be later.. oh this was amazing, i wish for so much more now... oh and lmao for drunk neji and neji's reaction to finding out at the end.. um.. yeah, great work ^___^
person Zrina
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, don't think I have ever laughed so much reading a fic!!! :D
person STARR*
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please write an interlude or something on how Sasuke reacted to the letter Itachi wrote. PLEASE. Oh how I love this fanfic. Words cannot describe how happy I was that you decided to write another chapter. It's such an amusing peice of drabble that one just can't help but love. I really do hope you continue this. I just can't help but smile at how they get into those situations.