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Wow...You really impressed me with the first part in Barfly,(i think i read it on deviantart)the second part is just as good maybe better. I enjoyed the writing style through out the whole story. The thoughts of each person had me laughing so much, Itachi was my personal favorite, it sounded like he was stalking Naruto, you know with the spy and all. Drunk!Neji is amusing to the point of busting a gut, maybe one day he might go to outerspace with his inventions... hehe.... Yay for a second round of mansex with Naruto on top! I absolutely love Naruto as seme, I always thought as him as being an equal opportunity type of guy, he seems like he would enjoy being on both side. Maybe a sequel could be written on how "certain" ::coughSasukecough:: people find out about Itachi and Naruto, how about his reaction toward the letter if Itachi was drunk enough to send it, or how genius Itachi finds a way to keep in touch with Naruto to have glorious fun!sex! Great story, great writing, and great humor! Your writing style is one of the best!

ROFLMAO!!!
you rock !

Okay, that right there was too priceless, I really almost laughed myself from my seat from the stupidity. A sequel on this would be too, too crazy. I like I like. I think that -was- a drunk Itachi, since you can't get too much out of him anyway, and Naru's reaction...yep, definitely a good sequel maker.

Now that's what I call great drunken sex! ^_^ I think we've all had at least one good-ass drunk lay. *hee hee* The way you wrote it was so hot, and yet, the morning after was hilarious! I mean, Naruto ran a few miles buck-ass naked away from the hotel, to make sure his ass didn't get killed...killed for screwing Itachi's ass thouroughly! *whew!* That was really good! EM

that was so great you have to do more!
I loved it...
Please more??? ^-^

that was so great you have to do more!
I loved it...
Please more??? ^-^

Wonderful fic. I can't say that I've ever seen a NaruIta, and to find something orginal in the wide world of Naruto fanfiction, well that's an accomplishment in itself.

The characterization of Naruto was great, with his over-blown self-esteem, and I loved the Jiraya and Tsunade traits. I can't really say that I know what an IC Itachi looks like, but you didn't fall into the Psychopathic Itachi, nor did you go for the 'Pretty-in-Pink' Itachi, which is also rather popular. He was actually... normal. I think I like that. I really don't think that canon Itachi wanted Sasuke to be as pouty as he is. The "but he's so /pathetic/" "Give him some tips" exchange was priceless.

The smexy parts were nice, especially the timing and flow and the short tangents you take. The ending was a clean wrap-up, the differences of their leaving versus who had control in the core of the story. I truly enjoyed this fic. Thank you!

Charming and very amusing.Wrap this up with hot sex and they where minutes well lived.Thanks.

“It’s fine if he’s a psychopath, but then he has to come off as sorry -he’s all pathetic about it.” ---- LOL!!! Best. Quote. Ever! I swear, that's the funniest thing i've ever seen in fanfic, and so true. I've been trying to put that into words for the longest time, but just end up saying something stupid like "Sasuke is inferior to Itachi because he's the wussy kind of evil", but you put it perfectly! I really enjoyed reading this, it was well written, and funny as hell. You wrote drunk Itachi so well, it didn't seem weird, only really, really funny.

Great job all around, and I hope to see more drunk Itachi from you one day :D

OMG! I loved this ^_^ I don't usually read NaruIta but my friend recently got me reading some and this one rocks! Drunk Itachi is quite amusing really XD

Love it ^^